The Last Stand.

[Iceydude168]

Again, I haven't been on for a while, so sorry if my OCG/TCG flat-out SUCKS. I'm trying to get into the habit of using OCG/TCG/Whatever they call it now.
[img]http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/8886/218618.jpg[/img]
Lore: When the monster this card is equipped to is destroyed or removed from play, destroy the card that destroyed or removed from play the monster, and inflict 700 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points.

[snowyash]

Let's have a look at this:

Name: Okay, sorta reminds me of Last Turn. Not the most creative but effective. 7/10
Pic: I really get the feeling that there is a better picture out there for a card like this. 6/10
OCG: Doesn't particularly look perfect... maybe change to the "attacking monster" rather than dragging it out. 7/10
Creativity: Not a very original idea. A slight change on similar cards. 6/10
Effect: It's like an easy-play Sakuretsu Armor that deals Burn damage as an added punishment for just attacking. OP'd 5/10

31/50 or 6.2/10

My recommendations:
- There's got to be a better pic for a card like this. Maybe check Deviantart or some of the Archives of another user. (Remember to credit though.)
- Effect could be one of the 2. Or introduce a more original effect, as this would help even more.