Frozen Judgment Posted November 1, 2010 Report Share Posted November 1, 2010 Hi, this is my first card in around 2 years. So of course my card making skills must have declined by a lot. I'm pretty sure my OCG (Is that what it's called? I forget.) and my knowledge of the rules have gotten pretty bad. So please don't be too harsh and give good criticism on how I should improve it. Thanks. [img]http://img826.imageshack.us/img826/1384/44956.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Lore]Equip only to a non-DARK monster. The equipped monster's Attribute is treated as DARK. The equipped monster's effect(s) is negated and it isn't affected by card effects. If you control a LIGHT monster, destroy the equipped monster. If your opponent controls a face-up LIGHT monster, the equipped monster must select it as an attack target during your Battle Phase. The equipped monster cannot be put in Defense position. The equipped monster's original ATK is doubled. When the equipped monster destroys your opponent's monster by battle, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the destroyed monster's ATK. If the equipped monster is destroyed by battle, its controller takes damage equal to double its original ATK. During each of your End Phases, the equipped monster loses 1000 ATK. When the equipped monster's ATK reaches 0, remove it from play and you take damage equal to double its original ATK. [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Jay~ Posted November 1, 2010 Report Share Posted November 1, 2010 "If this card is destroyed by battle" How can you destroy a Spell Card by battle? o_O Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frozen Judgment Posted November 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 1, 2010 Oops typo. Meant to say if the equipped monster. I'll fix it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom_Shaman Posted November 1, 2010 Report Share Posted November 1, 2010 wow. mouthful? drop..... If you control a LIGHT monster, destroy the equipped monster. The equipped monster cannot be put in Defense position. When the equipped monster destroys your opponent's monster by battle, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the destroyed monster's ATK. cool concept. you just tried to write a book on a card. lol. i sympethize with comming back after an extended absence, working on it myself. anyway cool card. great concept not awful execution 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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