acmeboy Posted November 1, 2010 Report Share Posted November 1, 2010 This is a new card I just made please tell me what you think [img]http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/204/170169l.jpg[/img][img]http://img51.imageshack.us/img51/2818/170169.jpg[/img] Hope this is better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted November 1, 2010 Report Share Posted November 1, 2010 On "Camelai", It's "destroyed" not "killed", also Spell, Trap, Graveyard and Monster effects need to be capitalized as shown. This card is OP because it cannot be destroyed... Maybe get rid of the not killed by battle part, lower its DEF to 2500 and have it change to defense position after it attacks? Idk, that may be changing it too much, but make sure to power it down somehow. On "Aesina" its just a plain card... but its pic is pretty good at least. Both pics are good, but 1 card is OP and the other card is lacking support or an effect (at least its a tuner!). I'm just not a big fan of monsters with no effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom_Shaman Posted November 1, 2010 Report Share Posted November 1, 2010 ^see above^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PandoraMaster Posted November 1, 2010 Report Share Posted November 1, 2010 ^ ^see 2 times above. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
acmeboy Posted November 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 hope these are better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lewis atherton Posted November 2, 2010 Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 Aesina should just be a plain card plus their are some ocg errors but the pictures are good so well done for that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snowyash Posted November 2, 2010 Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 [quote name='lewis atherton' timestamp='1288739349' post='4757895'] Aesina should just be a plain card plus their are some ocg errors but the pictures are good so well done for that. [/quote] He's right - your tuner should just be a Vanilla - and still a tuner. It'd still be right (I think) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
acmeboy Posted November 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 4, 2010 hope these are better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted November 4, 2010 Report Share Posted November 4, 2010 Names:Meh, not great.... Dont make much sense to me... Kamaria Camelia dosnt seem to mean any thing either.... Mabey im wrong.... Pics:Meh, the first one is okay the second one isnt... OCG/Grammer: Capitalization is about the only problem i see thats even note worthy.... Spell & Trap capitalized.... Effect:Meh, Im not sure if its Oped or not...... I guess not, Its a decent effect Lore:Pretty boring. Short and uses a word a real card would probably never ever use... "Hell" In case you where wondering... Balance:I guess its balanced... The little extras: Edition is on one but not the other. Same Serial Number (Just click random next time....) and the set number is a cute little thing but repeating it seems unessisary to me.. Also why did you just tag the vanilla onto this post? It dosnt seem nessiscary for anything...... And one last thing, why are there no spaces on the Aesina's Type but there are on Kamaria Camelai's Type? Ive never noticed it like that before..... Overall a [size="4"][color="#FF8C00"]C-[/color][/size] Could use some work. The first card is okay but the second card is pulling it down...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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