My nightmare set

[Renzoku Kira-]

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Please tell me what you think.

[GeroKeymaster]

You messed up the post. All it shows is a big, giant picture of a woman with a dragon, followed by a wrongly coded image link. Try to post it again, and I'll gladly offer my thoughts on it...

[Renzoku Kira-]

Ok I fixed it.

[lewis atherton]

Nightmare wolf is too powerful but other then that I think the others are ok

[GeroKeymaster]

First card wording slight fix: "A 'Nightmare' monster equipped with this card increases its ATK by 400."

Second: "FLIP: You can special summon one monster from your hand to the field that includes 'Nightmare' in its card name."

Third: "FLIP: Send this card to the Graveyard to destroy all Spell and Trap cards on the field."

Fourth: "If this card is destroyed by the effect of a Spell or Trap card, remove from play all monster cards on the field."

Critique

First Card: Seems like a good, low boost equip card. 10/10
Second: Good summoning card, but a bit over powered in that it summons any member of this set regardless of its stength. 8/10
Third: Powerful effect, but a bit of a double-edged sword as it will get rid of your cards as well. Would work as a good substitute to the now banned "Heavy Storm" 8/10
Fourth: Way too strong of an effect, and way too easy to use. Maybe limit it to opponent's spell/trap effects, send the cards to the graveyard instead of out of play, and raise the level by 1. 5/10