FTW (For The Wynn) Posted November 2, 2010 Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 Here it is: [img]http://img834.imageshack.us/img834/4797/264408z.jpg[/img] You can Tribute Summon this card in face-up Attack Position only by Tributing 1 "Inverz" monster. Once per turn, you can pay 1000 Life Points to negate the activation of a card's effect and destroy that card. Small effect, I know. It could be OP'd. Image Cred: I'm not exactly sure, Serenity (now The CandyMan) gave it to me but I'm fairly sure he got it from Jazin Kay. Hate/Rate/Whatever Edited Version: [font="tahoma, verdana, arial, sans-serif"][size="3"][color="#474747"][size=2][img]http://img834.imageshack.us/img834/4352/264408lz.jpg[/img][/size][/color][/size][/font] [font="tahoma, verdana, arial, sans-serif"][size="3"][color="#474747"][size="2"]This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card can only be Summoned by Tributing 1 "Inverz" monster. Once per turn, you can pay 1000 Life Points to negate the activation of a Spell, Trap or Monster card's effect and destroy that card.[/size][/color][/size][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dementuo Posted November 2, 2010 Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 One thing to note: A 6 star monster can be summoned with only 1 tribute anyways. Unless it's a special summon, there's no point to that first bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FTW (For The Wynn) Posted November 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 [quote name='Legendary Reploid Zero' timestamp='1288671530' post='4756408'] One thing to note: A 6 star monster can be summoned with only 1 tribute anyways. Unless it's a special summon, there's no point to that first bit. [/quote] I know what you were going for, but the effect is supposed to only allow this card to be summoned by tributing 1 "Inverz" monster. I'll reword it later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted November 2, 2010 Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 I thought that at first, but the card actually says it can be tribute summoned ONLY with an inverz tribute. Seems good, LP pay and specific tribute balance it out well, though i don't have much experience with inverz monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted November 2, 2010 Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 Make it so that it can't be Special Summoned and it's probably very balanced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Bad Pennar Posted November 2, 2010 Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 How i would Write it's effect, BTW, it's called Steelswarm in TF5 Once per turn, If this card was Tribute Summoned by Tributing a "Inverz" Monster, you can pay 1000 Life Points to negate the activation of a Spell, Trap, or Monster card's effect and destroy that card. The first clause wasn't needed, being a level 6, and that will be to balance it as well EDIT: Ninja'd Damn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FTW (For The Wynn) Posted November 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 [quote name='Lord Smeagle' timestamp='1288672067' post='4756422'] Make it so that it can't be Special Summoned and it's probably very balanced. [/quote] You're right, it shouldn't be Special Summoned. I'll edit it in either in a little bit or at some point tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted November 2, 2010 Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 You know... I'd think it goes both ways... I keep thinking it is a little Up'd and Op'd O _o ... How'd that happen? 9.7/10 .7 cause it's you Ftw ... Kiddin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FTW (For The Wynn) Posted November 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 [quote name='techi' timestamp='1288687915' post='4756608'] You know... I'd think it goes both ways... I keep thinking it is a little Up'd and Op'd O _o ... How'd that happen? 9.7/10 .7 cause it's you Ftw ... Kiddin [/quote] It happens, I've seen it before lol. I understand. I'm going to edit this card, but before I do, I wish to point out the first sentence. Read it carefully. It says ONLY. I have actually played before, I am well aware that a 6 Star requires only 1 tribute, and has for as long as I can remember. My point is that my effect isn't wrong based on that because it says "[color="#474747"][font="tahoma, verdana, arial, sans-serif"][size="2"]You can Tribute Summon this card in face-up Attack Position [b]only by Tributing 1 "Inverz" monster.[/b]"[/size][/font][/color] [color="#474747"][font="tahoma, verdana, arial, sans-serif"] [/font][/color] [color="#474747"][font="tahoma, verdana, arial, sans-serif"][size="2"]I don't blame anyone who posted that this was wrong, you didn't notice what I meant and for that I apologize. I also make these mistakes all the time, I'm cool with it, but I'm pointing it out here. Aside from that, I'll be editing the card for things that have also been pointed out. It'll be up soon.[/size][/font][/color] [color="#474747"][font="tahoma, verdana, arial, sans-serif"] [/font][/color] [color="#474747"][font="tahoma, verdana, arial, sans-serif"][size="2"]Edit: Edited version is up.[/size][/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SzayelAporro Posted November 2, 2010 Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 Better effect: This cannot be normal summoned or set, except tribute summon.This card can only be special summoned from your hand by paying 800 life points.You can Tribute Summon this card in face-up Attack Position only by Tributing 1 "Inverz" monster. Once per turn, you can pay 1000 Life Points to negate the activation of a Spell, Trap or Monster card's effect and destroy that card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FTW (For The Wynn) Posted November 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 [quote name='Blazing Inferno (Pyro)' timestamp='1288716607' post='4757053'] Better effect: This cannot be normal summoned or set, except tribute summon.This card can only be special summoned from your hand by paying 800 life points.You can Tribute Summon this card in face-up Attack Position only by Tributing 1 "Inverz" monster. Once per turn, you can pay 1000 Life Points to negate the activation of a Spell, Trap or Monster card's effect and destroy that card. [/quote] Thanks for the advice, but this version of the effect doesn't make sense balance wise. You make it easy to Special Summon, so I would always Special Summon it and then the second half is a killer effect. I made it tougher to summon so that it could only support 1 archetype, its own. Other than that, the idea isn't bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Bad Pennar Posted November 2, 2010 Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 [quote name='Flandre Scarlet' timestamp='1288672122' post='4756424'] Once per turn, If this card was Tribute Summoned by Tributing a "Inverz" Monster, you can pay 1000 Life Points to negate the activation of a Spell, Trap, or Monster card's effect and destroy that card. [/quote] Why do people keep ignoring me in this part of the forum, was i forgotten? >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FTW (For The Wynn) Posted November 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 [quote name='Flandre Scarlet' timestamp='1288725449' post='4757310'] Why do people keep ignoring me in this part of the forum, was i forgotten? >.> [/quote] Alright, I shall reword it once again, and I shall focus on the first part of the effect...which apparently very few got. Or perhaps I've overlooked something, so would you care to elaborate again? Also, I do remember you, but it has been awhile. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buttercup Posted November 2, 2010 Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 DO WANT You can't do anything more. It's great, 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bahamut - Envoy of the End Posted November 2, 2010 Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 Inverz are based around Tributing their own, so your effect makes sense. Just copy it off the other Inverz monsters. Technically speaking Inverz Lv5-6 usually have a name beginning with 'M', but the current name suits a good pic. Think it's a small price to pay to negate any effect, but it can't be widely abused because it needs an 'Inverz' Tribute, so it fits archtype, snug as a (evil) bug. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FTW (For The Wynn) Posted November 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 I have edited the effect, once again. I also added something I forgot to add earlier, and I think I made it clearer, or at least I hope so. Thanks for posting twice Flandre, as irritable as I may seem I'm quite glad for it.[quote name='Ser Warjacksworth' timestamp='1288727526' post='4757414'] DO WANT You can't do anything more. It's great, 8/10. [/quote] Thanks Ser [quote name='Matt Bahamut' timestamp='1288727667' post='4757421'] Inverz are based around Tributing their own, so your effect makes sense. Just copy it off the other Inverz monsters. Technically speaking Inverz Lv5-6 usually have a name beginning with 'M', but the current name suits a good pic. Think it's a small price to pay to negate any effect, but it can't be widely abused because it needs an 'Inverz' Tribute, so it fits archtype, snug as a (evil) bug. [/quote] Thanks Matt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted November 2, 2010 Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 Damn >> Everyone took my comments >< Well it's reasonably balanced. The only edit I saw necessay was the Special Summon restrict and the summon require. Everything else could have stayed the same. It's effect is very Inverz. The picture is iffy thought but still good. Concern though ;3~ It's name. Inverz monsters that require only 1 Tribute start w/ M. (Possibly meaning Middle or Medium as in Summon difficulty) Inverz monsters requiring 2 Tributes start w/ G. (Possibly for Greater as in summoning difficulty) Just something to think about ;D You don't have to change it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FTW (For The Wynn) Posted November 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 [quote name='♥Łövëły Ċ.Ċ♥' timestamp='1288728606' post='4757461'] Damn >> Everyone took my comments >< Well it's reasonably balanced. The only edit I saw necessay was the Special Summon restrict and the summon require. Everything else could have stayed the same. It's effect is very Inverz. The picture is iffy thought but still good. Concern though ;3~ It's name. Inverz monsters that require only 1 Tribute start w/ M. (Possibly meaning Middle or Medium as in Summon difficulty) Inverz monsters requiring 2 Tributes start w/ G. (Possibly for Greater as in summoning difficulty) Just something to think about ;D You don't have to change it. [/quote] Thanks Lovely C.C. I know about the name thing, how M = Middle and G = Great, or at least that's how it is right now, so it should probably start with an M. The problem is that most of those name are also warped versions of the Insect they represent (Morcth = Moth, Madith = Mantis, etc.) so I have to figure out how an Insect that this resembles that starts with an M...and I have nothing for that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted November 2, 2010 Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 :3 Could have done.....Dang >> cant think of any Other than Mosquito but this guy doesnt look Mosquito-y Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Bad Pennar Posted November 2, 2010 Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 Mastaug? perhaps? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FTW (For The Wynn) Posted November 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 [quote name='Flandre Scarlet' timestamp='1288741215' post='4757968'] Mastaug? perhaps? [/quote] Hmm...simple enough, I like it. It shall be changed in a moment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lewis atherton Posted November 3, 2010 Report Share Posted November 3, 2010 I like it and i feel it could be used, Well I would use it anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FTW (For The Wynn) Posted November 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 3, 2010 Thank you for your opinion and congrats on making 3 stars. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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