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[Gajit Le'snarg]

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[lewis atherton]

Waterfall of green has no picture. You have also included card type duplicates as these dont exsist they shouldn't be in the realistic card section. Also I feel the rose thorn and the two other cards like it are too powerful for Level 5 maybe level 6. Your ocg could also use a lot of work and poison Ivy shouldn't be their also as its not realistic. You have used some creative names and great pictures so well done for that. 6/10 so far you need to edit a lot to be realistic but its clear you have tried and put much effort in so please keep trying.

[Gajit Le'snarg]

yeah i tried on that waterfall of green the pic didnt want to reload so i said w/e
yup yup i thought the same thing this morning about the lv.5 plants for the fusion card
but that fusion card looks so wicked its way kooler than black rose dragon

oh you mean i cant have a monster card have two types?

like: plant/dragon

freakin japholes o.0

[Ieyasu Tokugawa]

If you want the monster to have 2 types, then put 1 type on the card, then start the effect with "This card is also treated as a (Insert type here)"

First off, don't do all caps with the names, just the first letter of each word. Also, for cards that have another card's name in the description, such as Poision Itch, you must put the ENTIRE card name in quotations.

Read up on OCG for the different monsters, your ritual spell is way off, and effects need to follow basic grammer. Capitals at the beginning of sentences, don't use run ons, etc. Also, certain words need to be capitalized, like card types and Life Points. I'll use Deadly Forest as an example.

Original: when this card is activated destroy all non plant-type face-up monsters on the field. both players must sacrifice 500 life points to normal summon a non plant-type monster, during your end phase tribute 1 plant-type monster to the graveyard if you cannot destroy this card.

New: When this card is activated, destroy all face-up non-Plant monsters on the field. Both players must sacrifice 500 life points to Normal Summon a non-Plant monster. During your End Phase, tribute 1 Plant monster you control. If you cannot, destroy this card.

Finally, try to avoid pictures with a border or words. If you have to use a certain picture, crop out anything unnecessary with Paint.

Some of these are good, just work on making things easier to understand.

[Gajit Le'snarg]

yes thank you very much that a great idea for the two types problem,
come some one tell me what this ofc is? and come on bud
you should know americans got no grammar skillz,
im like a human syntax overload

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