Demon deck (Please comment!)

[humanshield1ow1]

Here are my first cards. This being my first time doing this, please comment on anything you even think for a split-second I should do. Or anyway I can make these guys just plain awesome. It is incomplete and consists of demons, and spirits. (And of course some magic and trap cards.) This is supposed to be a booster deck.

[i][u]Monsters[/u][/i]

[IMG]http://i51.tinypic.com/1zdmzjm.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/2ch2bg6.jpg[/IMG]

[IMG]http://i53.tinypic.com/mm7675.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i51.tinypic.com/2jcdfgx.jpg[/IMG]

[IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/4rtbap.jpg[/IMG]

[i]Spell And Trap Cards[/i]

[IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/1smnvn.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/15wgphd.jpg[/IMG]

[IMG]http://i55.tinypic.com/2zg6tma.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/2h5soja.jpg[/IMG]

[Y.M.R.creator]

There's no such thing as a spirit monster.They only can have spirit-ability.And why is Western demon a effect-effect monster?
There are also OG errors like ''sacrefice''.It must be ''Tribute''.PICS are OK, but they can be better.
You have to look at cards of higher ranged members to learn it.

That's all i have to say

[humanshield1ow1]

Alright, I shall change the things you said. And thanks for the comment!

EDIT: One thing I juts noticed, on my first card it says [Effect / Effect ]

[jenofresh]

What he means is Spirit isn't a primary type. If you look in the drop down for selecting, you'll see 'Union/Toon/Tuner/Spirit/Effect' and the like

Spirit is a Card type that's different from Effect monsters.

[humanshield1ow1]

I have finished editing all of those cards, anything else before I move on?

[lewis atherton]

I like your creativity but their not quite their yet. 7 keep trying and edit the ocg. The picyures could also be quite a lot better.

[humanshield1ow1]

I have finished this booster pack. Any comments?

[humanshield1ow1]

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