Embittered Moon Posted November 2, 2010 Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 [b][size="5"]PICS ARE FROM PHOTOBUCKET; NO CREDIT NEEDED[/size][/b] [spoiler=The King of all Sea Serpents][img]http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/91/208217h.jpg[/img] 1 Tuner + 2 or more non-Tuner monsters When this card attacks, select one monster card zone on both your side of the field and your opponent's. Once per turn, you can remove from play a WATER monster from your Graveyard. If you do, your opponent can use all of their monster card zones again, and destroy one non-WATER monster on their side of the Field.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Water End Dragon][img]http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/8043/208217.jpg[/img] 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner WATER monsters Once per turn, when your opponent activates a Spell card, you can activate this card's effect. If you do, this card loses 500 ATK and DEF (permanently), and negate the activation of that card and destroy it.[/spoiler] CnC is appreciated. Thoghts? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lewis atherton Posted November 2, 2010 Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 I think water end dragon is too weak maybe give it 600 more defense points if you did that it would just be an averave card nothing special really try some more elaborate effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Embittered Moon Posted November 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 Really? i don't think that it is up 0__o I won't change Water End Dragon's stats because he needs to have it the same as the other "End Dragons." Thanks for the comment though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Embittered Moon Posted November 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 ok i need some more rates please! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lewis atherton Posted November 3, 2010 Report Share Posted November 3, 2010 OK then well thank you for looking at my comment at least Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Embittered Moon Posted November 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 3, 2010 yup. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snowyash Posted November 3, 2010 Report Share Posted November 3, 2010 Sadreas is definitely the more impressive and I could see him running as a trump card in a dedicated water deck. I swear I saw that pic on deviantart earlier though... Name: Original, just maybe not the best. 7/10 Pic: As good as it is, it doesn't quite have that official-card anime look. 8/10 OCG: Same mistake twice - problem is "monster card zone" = Monster Card Zone (I think) 8/10 Stats: Nice and in-proportion. Maybe could be lower when tied in to removal effect. 9/10 Effect: You haven't actually pointed out what you do to your opponent's Zones. I'm guessing you aren't letting them summon there. If so, you've balanced it nicely by taking away the lock when you remove, but you just need to add a bit more detail. 8/10 40/50 or 8/10 Water End Dragon looks pretty overshadowed here. Sardreas is getting all the glory... Name: Not very good, unoriginal. Looks like what KONAMI would use when they're making a random card to fill out a booster. 5/10 Pic: Ok, nothing special. 7/10 OCG: 1 problem. Spell card = Spell Card. 9/10 Stats: Fit alright. Would still seem OK after you activate it's effect (once) as well. 9/10 Effect: Nice idea, but if you were to activate it's effect more than once (could even use it up to 3 times a turn for 1500 drop) it would struggle big time. Maybe a 300 drop would help keep it competitive. 7/10 37/50 or 7.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Embittered Moon Posted November 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 3, 2010 [quote name='SKizophrenIK117' timestamp='1288744266' post='4758109'] Sadreas is definitely the more impressive and I could see him running as a trump card in a dedicated water deck. I swear I saw that pic on deviantart earlier though... [/quote] true 'dat, but some pics are on both DEviantART and photobucket. and thank you for the thorough review :][:also; people; if you were wondering where i got the idea for Sadreas's effect; i got it from the Yu Gi OH manga when Yugi/Atem fights Mako, and Mako uses his Leviathan to make Atem lose available monster card zones, and i thought that it was epic, so i made another sea monster card based on it :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Imperial Knight of Wisel Posted November 3, 2010 Report Share Posted November 3, 2010 I got a pic of mine that you can use. I call it King Posiden, Lord of the Oceans. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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