return set starting completely from scratch

[Careless Whisper]

Alright these are just the four first Cards, of my new set, Enter The Shakari. All these cards are based on my manga. So you might think, rendom Pictures. but they aren't I chose pics that looks very close to my manga's concept.

 

 

I'll be reusing some of my old pictures, not any with no backrounds. this time, I'm starting from Scratch, and once I get about 40 workable cards, I'll repost them all as an entire deck based on my new set.

[Careless Whisper]

Also I forgot to mention the one in my sig is also part of this set

[Guest JoshIcy]

the combo is overpowerd and dark sound rebirth wont even work.... 3/10

[Careless Whisper]

isn;t that what a combo is supposed to do, overthrow your opponent. and I guess you forgot to read all of "Dark Sound Dragon"'s effect, one part says that it can only be special summoned from the graveyard if you use "Dark Sound Rebirth" I'll reaarange the effect so it makes more sense.

[Careless Whisper]

and this is just the start of my deck, just wait to see what kind of beat-down deck this will become

[Guest JoshIcy]

sorry... i mean malfura is overpowerd, but i could be wrong... in todays game the format gets pretty crazy... im used to ritual monsters taking sidelines due to the number of cards just taken away.....

[Careless Whisper]

well I'm kinda different. and maybe some time in the future I'll make a deck that rivals this one.

[Careless Whisper]

but first let me tell you alittle something about "Dark Sound" (I will make this into a magic card 00.00) In my manga, it's a ski8ll that all Shakari are able to use. but only afew of them base their whole lives on it. Malfura is one of the few who master it. It's an explosive force strong enough to wipe the entire continent of Asia from the face of the earth. but it takes alot of energy to use it, and after use, the Shakari is left severely fatiqued. and alittle description of a Shakari:: A spiritual being that lives within a hosting body. Like the host becomes known as a "Double Soul." If the host is to learn the name of the Shakari that they are hosting, they have 2 choices; seal the Shakari, so it can never take controle, or gain complete controle over the Shakari.

[Yankee]

Hmm, I used that pic for my omega dragon, which Remix Duelist says is my best card, I don't like it XD

Anyway, um, a bit strong:

7/10

[RestLess-BoTics]

Well, these are pretty cool!

You have definetely improved since you were first here, but still, some improvements could be made. Try and think of better more unique effects, and work on the choosing and quality of the pictures you put on your cards.

Good job though! :)

[Junk Raver]

The picture used for your Ritual monster was also used for Yankee's Omega Dragon, thus no-card with that picture can ever have the same feel as yankee's did.

 

They are not that special.

[Careless Whisper]

aren't you judges supposed to give rankings, not what I have already learned from Yankee himself.

[MarbleZone]

The cards are okay, but the thing is, they're all high-level beasts and a ritual. Ritual monsters are virtually unplayable (forget Demise OTK) and making a deck around them is a fragile concept. I like the names and most of the pictures, but I can't quite cope with Malfura. It's the pic of an ordinary man with 2800 points... Doesn't feel right, know what I mean? ;)

The effects work well with the strategy you have in mind, but could use rewriting and grammar/OCG fixing. There are plenty of guides on this site to help you with those. Another important thing though: don't make very strong monsters with perfect effects for your set. That''l make them overpowered. If you want a good effect, make a weaker monster, and vice-versa, or make an uber monster with painful summoning requirements.

But again, the only big problem is the strategy itself, since Rituals and Level 7+ cards just aren't reliable enough in a real duel.

I'd like to see the complete set though. When will you have it ready?

 

On a side note for some people... The internet is not an endless source of cool pics for cards. It's pretty shallow to comment an entire set simply dissing the pictures like everything else isn't even worth your time. I've seen some big shots around here do that and really, it's not nice.

[Careless Whisper]

Well the thing about Shakari's, is that when they take physical form (this happens when the host dies) they look like ordinary people, but with insane amount of strength. but yet, there are only 4 important Shakari's in my manga. so there's only gonna be 4 High levels in this deck, not including the Dark Sound Dragon. and I'll have the complete set before the end of Febuary. Hopefully atleast. Just alittle spoiler however, I will not be making any fusion monsters in this deck. Fusion monsters are a waste of time. I mean look at blue eyes Untimate dragon compared to it's 3 materials. I'd rather have 3 attacks in one turn that add to 9000 attack points then one attack that equals half of that.