blackcrimsonshinobikaji Posted November 3, 2010 Report Share Posted November 3, 2010 Hi. It's been a while since I last was on here, so I decided to post some cards that I redid. I hope these are appropriate and not overpowered. I tried to make sure that these cards are balanced. If they seem too over done, I wouldn't mind a little advice (Nothing too harsh, please). [spoiler="Shippuuden-Naruto Uzumaki"] [img]http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/9859/229308.jpg[/img] Only on your turn, you may Special Summon one "Kage Bushin" token in ATK or DEF position for every 300 life points you sacrifice with this card's effect. Each "Kage Buushin" token has 1000 ATK and 1000 DEF and cannot be Tributed for a Normal Summon. When an effect of a card is applied to "Shippuuden-Naruto Uzumaki" that increases/decreases this cards's ATK/DEF , all "Kage Bushin" tokens will recieve the effect, as well. If "Shippuuden-Naruto Uzumaki" is destroyed in battle or removed from the field by a card effect, destroy all "Kage Bushin" tokens on the field.[/spoiler] [spoiler="Wind Style: Rasen-Shuriken"] [img]http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/9859/229308.jpg[/img] This card can only be activated during your Battle Phase and when one face-up "Shippuuden-Naruto Uzumaki" and at least two "Kage Bushin" tokens are on the field. Tribute two "Kage Bushin" tokens to destroy one monster on your opponents side of the field and deal damage equal to the destroyed monster's ATK to your opponents Life Points and remove it from play. Afterwards, reduce the ATK and DEF of the selected "Shippuuden-Naruto Uzumaki" by 500.[/spoiler] [spoiler="Spirit of The Sage"] [img]http://img840.imageshack.us/img840/9859/229308.jpg[/img] Select one "Shippuuden-Naruto Uzumaki" on the field and equip it with this card. After this card and the selected monster are on the field for 3 turns, send this card to the Graveyard and remove the selected "Shippuuden-Naruto Uzumaki" from play and Special Summon one "Sage Mode-Naruto Uzumaki" from your deck or hand. If it was Special Summoned from your deck, shuffle your deck. If the selected monster that this card is equiped to is destroyed, destroy this card.[/spoiler] [spoiler="Sage Mode-Naruto Uzumaki"] [img]http://img801.imageshack.us/img801/9859/229308.jpg[/img] This card is treated as "Shippuuden-Naruto Uzumaki". This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Spirit of the Sage". Any card with an effect to increase ATK/DEF that is added to this card is doubled. If this card is sent from the field to your hand or deck by a card effect, Special Summon one "Shippuuden-Naruto Uzumaki" that was removed from play.[/spoiler] These two I came up with later on. Hope they're ok. [spoiler="Beginings-Naruto Uzumaki"] [img]http://img801.imageshack.us/img801/2439/229308e.jpg[/img] Only once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can Special Summon one "Kage Bushin" token in ATK or DEF position by spending 400 Life Points for each token you wish to Special Summon. Each "Kage Bushin" token has 1000 ATK and 1000 DEF. Any effect from a Spell, Trap, or Monster Card that is applied to "Beginnings-Naruto Uzumaki" that increases/decreases this card's ATK/DEF is applied to all "Kage Bushin" tokens on your side of the field. If "Beginings-Naruto Uzumaki" is destroyed in battle or removed from the field by a card effect, destroy all "Kage Bushin" tokens on your side of the field.[/spoiler] [spoiler="Rasengan: Spiral Chakra Sphere"] [img]http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/9859/229308.jpg[/img] This card can only be activated during the Battle Phase and when one face-up "Shippuuden-Naruto Uzumaki" or "Beginnings-Naruto Uzumaki" and at least one "Kage Bushin" token is on the field. When you attack on this turn with "Shippuuden-Naruto Uzumaki" or "Beginnings-Naruto Uzumaki", and the Target Monster's ATK is 3000 or more, destroy the Target Monster and deal damage to the opponent's Life Points equal to half of the destroyed Monster's ATK.[/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wic0 Posted November 3, 2010 Report Share Posted November 3, 2010 Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice, I'm assuming normal Iruka would be like 6 star and kakashi would be like 7 or 8, etc. here are my eggies:[url=http://dragcave.net/view/tCGI][img]http://dragcave.net/image/tCGI.gif[/img][/url][url=http://dragcave.net/view/7veC][img]http://dragcave.net/image/7veC.gif[/img][/url] click one or they will die (I'm serious) and you and only you will be responible for a ghost egg haunting you for the rest of ur life... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
noraai Posted November 3, 2010 Report Share Posted November 3, 2010 Very nice cards. I really liked the ''Kage Bunshin'' idea. You just could lower Shippuden Naruto's DEF to 1400 or something. Otherwise, excellent! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blackcrimsonshinobikaji Posted November 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 4, 2010 [quote name='Ryik7' timestamp='1288766304' post='4758675'] Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice, I'm assuming normal Iruka would be like 6 star and kakashi would be like 7 or 8, etc. here are my eggies:[url=http://dragcave.net/view/tCGI][img]http://dragcave.net/image/tCGI.gif[/img][/url][url=http://dragcave.net/view/7veC][img]http://dragcave.net/image/7veC.gif[/img][/url] click one or they will die (I'm serious) and you and only you will be responible for a ghost egg haunting you for the rest of ur life... [/quote] Thank you! I really worked hard on these. Please help me get more opinions on my cards. I want to get them just right.[quote name='noraai' timestamp='1288769329' post='4758714'] Very nice cards. I really liked the ''Kage Bunshin'' idea. You just could lower Shippuden Naruto's DEF to 1400 or something. Otherwise, excellent! [/quote] Ok, I might just do that! If you can, please help me get more opinions on my cards! I'd really appreciate it! I plan to focus on Naruto Cards. The "Konoha" cards are to be the first ones I wish to work on. Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xm0nkeyxbutt Posted November 4, 2010 Report Share Posted November 4, 2010 so there are quite a few things: - your OCG (official card grammar) is very wrong is many places. there are too many to tell you all of them but there is a thread explaining the proper OCG. - you need to give credit to the artist of the pictures you used, if it is not specified then at least credit the site you got them from. - try to find pics that are not pixelated and have no words in them. if possible, you can crop your pics so the words don't show. - and one last little suggestion, since your cards are naruto themed, the name on your monster cards should have "Naruto Uzumaki" come first and then the rest of the name. EXAMPLE: Naruto Uzumaki - Sage Mode hope i was helpful. if you want, you can take a look at my naruto cards i recently posted. click my username then click topics and you'll see them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blackcrimsonshinobikaji Posted November 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 7, 2010 [quote name='Xm0nkeyxbutt' timestamp='1288852287' post='4760677'] so there are quite a few things: - your OCG (official card grammar) is very wrong is many places. there are too many to tell you all of them but there is a thread explaining the proper OCG. - you need to give credit to the artist of the pictures you used, if it is not specified then at least credit the site you got them from. - try to find pics that are not pixelated and have no words in them. if possible, you can crop your pics so the words don't show. - and one last little suggestion, since your cards are naruto themed, the name on your monster cards should have "Naruto Uzumaki" come first and then the rest of the name. EXAMPLE: Naruto Uzumaki - Sage Mode hope i was helpful. if you want, you can take a look at my naruto cards i recently posted. click my username then click topics and you'll see them. [/quote] Now that looks at my cards I DEFINITELY see the mistakes. Gotta redo em again. Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blackcrimsonshinobikaji Posted November 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 18, 2010 Thanks to the advice of Xm0nkeyxbutt, and spending more time on reading the OCG rules, I have now RE-revised my cards. Although, as you can see, I did not change the images, as I rather liked them despite them being "fuzzy". Sometimes images can get like that. Please give me some feedback on these cards. I would appreciate it.(Try not to be harsh, ok?) [img]http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/9859/229308.jpg[/img] [WARRIOR/KONOHA/EFFECT] Only on your turn, you may Special Summon a "Kage Bushin Token" for 300 Life Points each. Every "Kage Buushin Token" has 1000 ATK and 1000 DEF, is treated as "Shippuuden-Naruto Uzumaki", and cannot be Tributed for a Normal Summon. When an effect of a card is applied to "Shippuuden-Naruto Uzumaki" that increases or decreases this card's ATK or DEF , all "Kage Bushin Tokens" that were Special Summoned after the effect(s) was applied will recieve the effect(s), as well. If "Shippuuden-Naruto Uzumaki" is destroyed in battle or by a card effect, destroy all "Kage Bushin Tokens" on the field that were Special Summoned by this card's effect. [img]http://img44.imageshack.us/img44/9859/229308.jpg[/img] [Equipment Spell Card] Select one "Shippuuden-Naruto Uzumaki" on the field and equip it with this card. While this card is equipped, the selected monster cannot attack. After this card and the selected monster are on the field for 3 turns, send this card to the Graveyard and remove the selected "Shippuuden-Naruto Uzumaki" from play and Special Summon one "Sage Mode-Naruto Uzumaki" from your deck or hand. If it was Special Summoned from your deck, shuffle your deck. If the selected monster that this card is equiped to is destroyed, destroy this card. [img]http://img44.imageshack.us/img44/9779/229308g.jpg[/img] [WARRIOR/KONOHA/EFFECT] This card is treated as "Shippuuden-Naruto Uzumaki". This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Spirit of the Sage". Any card with an effect to increase ATK and/or DEF that is added to this card is doubled. If this card is sent from the field to your hand or deck by a card effect, Special Summon one "Shippuuden-Naruto Uzumaki" that was removed from play. [img]http://img715.imageshack.us/img715/9859/229308.jpg[/img] [WARRIOR/KONOHA/EFFECT] Only once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can Special Summon a "Kage Bushin Token" for 400 Life Points each. Every Special Summoned "Kage Bushin Token" has 1000 ATK and 1000 DEF, is treated as "Beginings-Naruto Uzumaki", and cannot be Tributed for a Normal Summon. Any effect from a Spell, Trap, or Monster Card that increases or decreases the ATK and/or DEF of "Beginnings-Naruto Uzumaki" is applied to all "Kage Bushin Tokens" that were Special Summoned after the effect(s) was applied to this card on your side of the field. If "Beginings-Naruto Uzumaki" is destroyed in battle or by a card effect, destroy all "Kage Bushin Tokens" on your side of the field that were Special Summoned by this card's effect. [img]http://img713.imageshack.us/img713/9859/229308.jpg[/img] [Quick-Play Spell Card] This card can only be activated during the Battle Phase, when one face-up "Shippuuden-Naruto Uzumaki" or "Beginnings-Naruto Uzumaki", and at least one "Kage Bushin Token" is on your side of the field. If you attack on this turn with "Shippuuden-Naruto Uzumaki" or "Beginnings-Naruto Uzumaki", and the target monster's ATK is 3000 or more, destroy the monster and deal damage equal to half of the destroyed monster's ATK to your opponent's Life Points. [img]http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/9859/229308.jpg[/img] [Quick-Play Spell Card] This card can only be activated during your Battle Phase, when one face-up "Shippuuden-Naruto Uzumaki", and at least two "Kage Bushin" tokens are on the field. Tribute two "Kage Bushin" tokens to destroy one monster on your opponents side of the field and deal damage equal to the destroyed monster's ATK to your opponents Life Points and remove it from play. Afterwards, reduce the ATK and DEF of the selected "Shippuuden-Naruto Uzumaki" by 500. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shinwa Posted November 18, 2010 Report Share Posted November 18, 2010 Blurry Pictures ... you wrote "Naruto Uzumaki" ( that sound so much like " I am a Noob " ) ... nothing more to say .... I dont rate them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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