First cards. (Booster pack.) Comment!

[humanshield1ow1]

Here are my first cards. This being my first time doing this, please comment on anything you even think for a split-second I should do. Or anyway I can make these guys just plain awesome. It is complete and consists of demons. (And of course some magic and trap cards.) This is supposed to be a booster deck.

[i][u]Monsters[/u][/i]

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[i]Spell And Trap Cards[/i]

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[dogfish44]

First of, excluding demon release and northern demon, I dislike the images.

Secondly, the OCG needs a lot of work. I'll have a shot at the monsters:

Eastern and Western Demon: (Just use common sense and change 1 word for Western)

When this card would be sent to the graveyard, you can discard 1 "Eastern Demon", or 1 "Southern Demon", or 1 "Northern Demon" to prevent this card being sent to the Graveyard.

Northern and Southern just need a couple of changes. Not big ones though:

Whenever you destroy a card with more than 2500 ATK, you can Special Summon either "Eastern Demon" or "Western Demon" from your hand or deck.

Demon Token:

"Release 2 "Demon Token" on your side of the field to Special Summon "Southern Demon" or "Northern Demon" from your hand.

Possessed Sword:

Whilst the equipped card is in attack position, it gains 500 ATK. Whilst the equipped card is in defense position, it loses 500 DEF.

Dark Energy Change - I'd change this effect, the OCG effect would take a lot of time, and would probably not work.

Demonic Laughter: (UnderPowered, but...) Activate when a monster declares an attack. Negate the attack.

Demon Release: You may activate this card when a monster with less than 1000 ATK declares an attack, and you have a "Demon" card on your side of the field. Destroy the attacking monster.