Crusher Destroyer (Big smashy thing)

[~NOiSE~]

A card I just made because I wanted to make one.

Any OCG corrections would be appreciated, as well as other comments.

Thanks for viewing~

[center][img]http://img716.imageshack.us/img716/3851/273918t.jpg[/img][/center]

[center][b]Lore:[/b] [i]If this card inflicts battle damage to your opponent, place 1 Crush Counter on this card. Once per turn, you can remove 1 Crush Counter from this card to have it inflict Piercing damage until the End Phase. If this card inflicts battle damage by destroying an opponent's Defense Position monster, destroy 1 card on the field.[/i][/center]

[Archwing]

Name:Pretty good, nothing eye catching 8/10
Pic:Very nice. I like it alot 9/10
OCG/Grammer:Looks all good
Effect:Intresting. You took some ideas i didnt expect to ever be chained together and make sense out of them.
Balance:Hrmmm, At first i thought it was a tad Oped but if i think about it, Your opponent can just go on the offence to avoid the last part of the effect...So its balanced
The little Extras:Editon is missing, thats about it~
Overall a [color="#48D1CC"][size="4"]B-[/size][/color] Better than average but dosnt "wow" me alot... Still very good

[~NOiSE~]

[quote name='Archwing' timestamp='1288839138' post='4760432']
Name:Pretty good, nothing eye catching 8/10
Pic:Very nice. I like it alot 9/10
OCG/Grammer:Looks all good
Effect:Intresting. You took some ideas i didnt expect to ever be chained together and make sense out of them.
Balance:Hrmmm, At first i thought it was a tad Oped but if i think about it, Your opponent can just go on the offence to avoid the last part of the effect...So its balanced
The little Extras:Editon is missing, thats about it~
Overall a [color="#48D1CC"][size="4"]B-[/size][/color] Better than average but dosnt "wow" me alot... Still very good
[/quote]

Thanks for commenting.

I didn't really set out to make anything ground-breaking with this card, I just wanted to make something to see if people would comment. I also don't generally put what edition the card is, since it's not really a factor that adds or detracts from the card.

Would you be willing to look at my [i]Noxious [/i] cards and comment?

[Archwing]

[quote]Would you be willing to look at my Noxious cards and comment?[/quote]
Im actually about to head to bed, leave a comment on my profile with a link to it and ill do it ASAP

[~NOiSE~]

[quote name='Archwing' timestamp='1288839571' post='4760458']
Im actually about to head to bed, leave a comment on my profile with a link to it and ill do it ASAP
[/quote]

Thanks bro. I'm trying to get some publicity, so anything helps.

[CNo.101 S.H. Death Knight]

i like the picture is artistic and the effect match the nature of the name and pic and i like it that it gain counter to gain piercing effect pretty original. it gain more destruction through effect and not ATK with i like it better. you got yourself a 9.5/10

[~NOiSE~]

[quote name='Scheath&Thanatos' timestamp='1288842077' post='4760558']
i like the picture is artistic and the effect match the nature of the name and pic and i like it that it gain counter to gain piercing effect pretty original. it gain more destruction through effect and not ATK with i like it better. you got yourself a 9.5/10
[/quote]

Thanks a ton. I like getting comments...

[Piercer of the Heavens]

even though you just made a card to make a card it came out super good
and it has an interesting card effect good card

[~NOiSE~]

[quote name='monkeylife2' timestamp='1288843618' post='4760589']
even though you just made a card to make a card it came out super good
and it has an interesting card effect good card
[/quote]

I always try my best to do quality work, even if the card itself isn't that extraordinary. In this case, the card turned out very nice, and I'm happy with it. Thanks for commenting~

[Big Lez]

humm
Yeah, that's a nice effect.
Removing a counter might cause destruction of 2 cards..+ gaining a new counter and reducing opp's LP's...i love it to have many different effects, caused by just 1 little thing.


overall this card is a very good 8/10 ^^

[~NOiSE~]

Bump.

[quote name='Dr.Gentle' timestamp='1288895014' post='4761336']
humm
Yeah, that's a nice effect.
Removing a counter might cause destruction of 2 cards..+ gaining a new counter and reducing opp's LP's...i love it to have many different effects, caused by just 1 little thing.


overall this card is a very good 8/10 ^^
[/quote]

Thanks much~

[Raine]

I like the idea of having a rubric to grade I'll try it
Name: 8/10 Nice but not super creative
Image: 10/10 It matches perfectly wonderfully done to fit too
OCG: 10/10 From what I can see
Effect: 9/10 Its very self sufficient and destructive very very very little bit of OPness because of that but whatever
Balance: 8/10 More balanced then a stardust (I HATE THEM) but not like underpowered you know what scratch that 9/10
Notes: I would run it in a non Rock deck so I say it is a very good card
The Sum of all Parts: 46/50 92% A- That works for you doesn't it

[~NOiSE~]

[quote name='GrandRaine' timestamp='1288930779' post='4762893']
I like the idea of having a rubric to grade I'll try it
Name: 8/10 Nice but not super creative
Image: 10/10 It matches perfectly wonderfully done to fit too
OCG: 10/10 From what I can see
Effect: 9/10 Its very self sufficient and destructive very very very little bit of OPness because of that but whatever
Balance: 8/10 More balanced then a stardust (I HATE THEM) but not like underpowered you know what scratch that 9/10
Notes: I would run it in a non Rock deck so I say it is a very good card
The Sum of all Parts: 46/50 92% A- That works for you doesn't it
[/quote]

I was listening to [i]Mastodon[/i] and just named the card after the track I was listening to, it seemed to fit.

Thanks for the review, my cards seem to be getting better recpetion~

[dzx9000]

9/10

[~NOiSE~]

Bump.

[~NOiSE~]

Bump.

[Nightmare Moon]

Nice work, Jester Head. I'm liking the distribution of "Crush Counters", very nice. ^^

Hmm... everything seems to be in order here. So.. a [b]9[/b]/10 from me.

[~NOiSE~]

[quote name='Grand_Hokage_Tsunade' timestamp='1289169348' post='4769998']
Nice work, Jester Head. I'm liking the distribution of "Crush Counters", very nice. ^^

Hmm... everything seems to be in order here. So.. a [b]9[/b]/10 from me.
[/quote]

Thanks much~

[Crazy Fresh]

Is there other cards that use the crush counters? be good to see a mini-set.
i like this card. good job. id be proud of this card if it was one that i had made

[~NOiSE~]

[quote name='Crazy Fresh' timestamp='1289172273' post='4770199']
Is there other cards that use the crush counters? be good to see a mini-set.
i like this card. good job. id be proud of this card if it was one that i had made
[/quote]

I just made it up actually, though making a set might be a cool idea...

And thanks, by the way!

[eraser123]

This is really good. I love the way it is powerful, and not by its attack: it's effect! Overrall, an 8/10.

[~NOiSE~]

[quote name='eraser123' timestamp='1289179531' post='4770533']
This is really good. I love the way it is powerful, and not by its attack: it's effect! Overrall, an 8/10.
[/quote]

Thanks! I like cards that do more damage through abilities rather than brute strength.

[~NOiSE~]

Bump. Is there a limit to how many times you can do that as longs as it's at least every 24 hours?

[judedudemude]

your cursher destoyer seem a little op to me maybe increasing its level by one or two ??? OR maybe drop the attack and defense of it by any where 100 to 300 but that just me (THE ONLY SANE PERSON LEFT ON EARTH ..... and planet zeeneu of course)

[~NOiSE~]

Bump...