Techi☺ Posted November 4, 2010 Report Share Posted November 4, 2010 I am going to use this deck in a Rp(http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/227796-the-pharaohs-descendents-duel-academy/page__gopid__4762468#entry4762468) that I am Demi-Hosting soon. [spoiler=Monsters] [spoiler=Burning Overlord][img]http://img44.imageshack.us/img44/4797/243934.jpg[/img] [Spoiler=Lore] During your standby phase, place one Blaze Token on this card(Max:3). This monster gains 400 attack points for each Blaze token on it. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [Spoiler=Burning Mech-Warrior] [img]http://img834.imageshack.us/img834/4440/243934s.jpg[/img] [Spoiler=Lore]This monster is also considered to be a Machine-typed monster. Once per turn, by discarding one card from your hand, you may destroy one spell or trap card on your opponents side of the field and place one Blaze counter on this monster(Max:3). Increase the attack of this monster by 200 for each Blaze counter on it. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [Spoiler= Burning King William] [img]http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/4797/243934.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Lore] When this card is Summoned successfully, Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower FIRE monster from your hand and place 1 Blaze Counter on it. Every FIRE monster on the field gains 300 ATK plus an additional 100 ATK (more balanced) for each FIRE monster on the field. Once per turn you can discard a card from your hand to switch the battle mode of 1 Monster your opponent controls and place 1 Blaze Counter on this card (max. 4). [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler= Spells+Trap] [spoiler=Blazed Palms] [img]http://img830.imageshack.us/img830/4797/243934.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Lore] This card can only be equipped to a Warrior-Type FIRE monster. The equipped card gains 500 ATK and place 2 Blaze Counters on it. The monster equipped with this card cannot be targeted by your opponent's Spell or Trap Cards during the turn this card is activated.[/spoiler] [/spoiler] [/spoiler] Credits- So far I think almost all of these Images are from Father Wolf, thank you Father Wolf!! More cards are on their way, I have like 6 more finished, and I am making a whole deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigdrummerboi13 Posted November 4, 2010 Report Share Posted November 4, 2010 The first 2 cards should have a different effect because the burn counters pump them up too quick and too much. You could lower their attack so they are not crazy high 4 star monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted November 4, 2010 Report Share Posted November 4, 2010 Har har har, your in my domain now beeoch! Names:Decent, not too catchy... 7.5/10 Pics:Pretty good 8.5/10 OCG/Grammer: No worse than my own work, so i cant say much about it Effects:Pretty Good Balance:Pretty good too... No real balance issues... Cept the obvious one on the first card.... The little Extras:Not Set #, Edition, Serial # or creator name? How could you! [size="1"]Jk[/size] Its okay but they could use some work if you ask me...... Overall a [size="4"][color="#FF8C00"]C+[/color][/size] A little above average but not great, you could easily do better. They arnt bad but they seem pretty basic to me... you must be kinda rusty, ive never seen you on RC before.... Mabey im just not paying enough attention If you want i could help with some more pics. Ive got a archive noone used Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XxX_Kuriboh_XxX Posted November 4, 2010 Report Share Posted November 4, 2010 [quote name='Archwing' timestamp='1288905649' post='4761734'] Har har har, your in my domain now beeoch! Names:Decent, not too catchy... 7.5/10 Pics:Pretty good 8.5/10 OCG/Grammer: No worse than my own work, so i cant say much about it Effects:Pretty Good Balance:Pretty good too... No real balance issues... The little Extras:Not Set #, Edition, Serial # or creator name? How could you! [size="1"]Jk[/size] Its okay but they could use some work if you ask me...... Overall a [size="4"][color="#FF8C00"]C+[/color][/size] A little above average but not great, you could easily do better. They arnt bad but they seem pretty basic to me... you must be kinda rusty, ive never seen you on RC before.... Mabey im just not paying enough attention If you want i could help with some more pics. Ive got a archive noone used [/quote] Dear BigDrummerBoi13, I run an awesome Spellcaster deck and the spell counters ARE JUST THE SAME!!!!!!! Bigdrummerboi13, that's the way THAT REAL COUNTERS GIVE ATTACK POINTS TO LEVEL 4 MONSTERS!!!!!!!!!! Sincerely, Santa Claus. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bahamut - Envoy of the End Posted November 4, 2010 Report Share Posted November 4, 2010 Overlord - After three turns, this becomes a Lv4 with 3000ATK. It's a bit overpowered and a bit dull. Plus Overlord is more of a name for boss monsters, not support. Mech-Warrior - Better. King William - Does Will gain anything by putting counters on himself? Overall - Aesthetically the pics looks card but the Archtype needs a better name than 'Burning'. What I'd do is just punch 'Fire' into a thesaurus engine and mash words together, worked well for me on a WIND Archtype I've started work on. I can see where you are going in terms of a pure power/accelerating strength Deck (very firey) but currently doesn't do it in a great way. With work could be good though. Hope your RP goes well, what's it going to be about? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted November 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 5, 2010 [quote name='Matt Bahamut' timestamp='1288908297' post='4761841'] Overlord - After three turns, this becomes a Lv4 with 3000ATK. It's a bit overpowered and a bit dull. Plus Overlord is more of a name for boss monsters, not support. Mech-Warrior - Better. King William - Does Will gain anything by putting counters on himself? Overall - Aesthetically the pics looks card but the Archtype needs a better name than 'Burning'. What I'd do is just punch 'Fire' into a thesaurus engine and mash words together, worked well for me on a WIND Archtype I've started work on. I can see where you are going in terms of a pure power/accelerating strength Deck (very firey) but currently doesn't do it in a great way. With work could be good though. Hope your RP goes well, what's it going to be about? [/quote] The Rp is actually already posted in the icc/not started phase, I will have a link up soon, I hope a lot of people join. I think the Rp is Awesome, if you join soon enough you may get a power that turns cards real for a sort period of time... My Character will be a Fire freak kid(As you can tell from the deck so far...) And he is going to be obtaining the Fire god card... We have made 3 custom god cards for the Rp so far... Fire Shadow and Light. The Rp is going to be based around a deul acadamy and basicly every character will be a first year to prevent crappy pre-plots from happenning... And so far My cards seem to be good... Oh and most lvl 4 monsters wont live 3 turns anyway so there is a very very small Chance Overlord will actually gain his full attack alone. Luckilly most of my next up cards are support that will help overlord with his small survival proplem... I am mostly surprised that everyone was Shouting OP!! like a hundred times... You guys always surprise me that way... And for a last note, Please tell me if you find a awesome pic I can use for my fire Deck. I will Love you if you do it >.< Kiddin... I will probably just get you a rep or something... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted November 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 12, 2010 -Its been updated with a few more cards I guess... (I need to make a deck of this by the way... so any help at all will be accepted...) BUMB-peh-Dee-BUMB-BUMB... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted November 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2010 -BUMB- ... ... ... ... ... ... ... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blood Yuchi Posted November 28, 2010 Report Share Posted November 28, 2010 Burning Overlord - Yes, it's kinda overpower like what Matt said, 3000Atk after the 3rd Standby phrase, you might want to lower the attack gain by 200 or make a better condition to gain the counters instead. Burning Mech-Warrior - For me it's still overpower, a monster with a based attack of 1800 Atk, destroy one spell or trap card just by dicarding a card and power gain is way too much. It's way stronger then Breaker the Magical Warrior. [spoiler=Breaker the Magical Warrior] [IMG]http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100725023135/yugioh/images/6/6c/BreakerTheMagicalWarriorSDSC-EN-C-1E.png[/IMG] [/spoiler] You might want to have this effect for this card instead. [spoiler=Lore] | Burning Mech-Warrior | FIRE | 4 | Warrior | 1800 | 1600 | This card is also treated as a Machine-Type monster. Once per turn, you can send 1 "Burning" monster from your hand to your Graveyard to place 1 Blaze counter on this monster(Max:1). Increase the attack of this monster by 200 for each Blaze counter on it. You can remove 1 Blaze Counter from this card to destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field. [/spoiler] Burning King William - Likewise, change "you can discard a card" to "you can send 1 "Burning" monster from your hand to your Graveyard". And I just feel William looks too weak than your other Burning monsters in terms of picture. I'll try look through look through my pics and make some for you for this set. This is all the RP so that it will prosper Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted November 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2010 Thanks... I guess people don't see that your opponent can actually KILL a monster eventually... A monster alone won't last more than 2 turns without back-up(Unless your opponent sucks) The monsters would be lucky to survive 2 turns... They should only recieve that gain by my Standby phase... leaving them perfectly weak for their first turn... Oh well... the People have spoken... The "Case" Has been rested I guess... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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