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A Yandere set.....


Jord200

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based off a dream I recently had.....
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Put a pg-13/Blood Warning on the post (I know mods at least used to be strict about this)
Names:Some are just okay others are pretty good 8/10
Pics: Same with the names, Some are okay, others are great. "Command" Witch (you need another "M") is the only pic that needs a background...
OCG/Grammer:Its readable, thats what counts ;D
Effects:Decent. Nothing special.... Work okay with eachother
Balance: Seems okay... Except the Synchro monster.....
The little Extras:Well the serial # and Year are on it at least...
Overall [size="4"][color="#FFA500"]C[/color][/size]
This is about average.
they could use a little work on the overall idea, what im seeing are a bunch of bloody girls with a demon theme and blood fetish. mabey play around with the insanity idea? Or that if they become too violent they become somthing even eviler?
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First of all, OCG and grammar is readable but terrible. Read up at the OCG thread and LEARN a lot more before trying your hand at cardmaking again. The pics are nothing amazing (that Synchro one is really good though, just needs a background) and the effects are boring and underwhelming. Okay balance, but the Synchro is broken.

3/10.
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