Ignis avis Posted November 5, 2010 Report Share Posted November 5, 2010 [spoiler=Machine Emperor] [img]http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/830/230256.jpg[/img][spoiler=effect] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by its effect. When a face-up monster you control is destroyed by a card effect and sent to the Graveyard you can Special Summon this card from your hand. Once per turn, you can equip 1 face-up Synchro Monster your opponent controls to this card. This card gains ATK equal to half of the combined ATK of all Synchro Monsters equipped to this card by its own effect. Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 Synchro monster equipped to this card to negate the activation of an opponent's card effect, and destroy it.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=Monsters][img]http://img585.imageshack.us/img585/830/230256.jpg[/img][img]http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/9523/230256d.jpg[/img][img]http://img51.imageshack.us/img51/830/230256.jpg[/img][img]http://img51.imageshack.us/img51/8427/230256f.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler=Spells][/spoiler] [spoiler=trap][img]http://img825.imageshack.us/img825/830/230256.jpg[/img][img]http://img560.imageshack.us/img560/7031/230256z.jpg[/img] [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CNo.101 S.H. Death Knight Posted November 5, 2010 Report Share Posted November 5, 2010 I like Machine Emperor Lemniscate Infinity although it miss the "other monsters you control cannot attack" the reason it have that because it's ATK and DEF are fixed unlike Grannel's it wavering. for Infinity Core it's have to be level 4 to have both of the effect unless you give a liability to summon except certain condition. Infinity knight is pretty balance and machine Soldier Kael is good, plain but good. so 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ignis avis Posted November 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 6, 2010 Thanks for the constructive criticism. Will be adding more soon. and updated the old ones. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lewis atherton Posted November 6, 2010 Report Share Posted November 6, 2010 I think basically all of your cards are overpowered perhaps only slightly but still overpowered 1800 atc points with a direct attack is just far too much the drawback isn't enough because your deck could counter act the draw back so easily making it not really a draw back. it doesn't make sence for a 2 star to have 2000 atc points i dont see why i cannot be 5 stars. The ideas are good and you should just weaken them a bit All of your pictures are 10/10 and look very official. I also think you would do well to add some trap cards. Unfortunatly I must be honest and can only award you 6/10 but i can see you have tried so dont give up. If you change what I have asked you to perhaps it could be a 10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max West Posted November 6, 2010 Report Share Posted November 6, 2010 Knight and Kael are Overpowered. Colosseum + Kael = one turn, LV 4, continuous 2500 ATK beatstick. 6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ignis avis Posted November 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 6, 2010 Compare These cards and tell me how OPed the machine emperor is compared. 1 level higher less ATK gain through equipping Synchros, less ATK than wisel who he is based off of, and a harder effect to use... [spoiler=compare] [img]http://images4.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20101023021925/yugioh/images/thumb/b/b8/MachineEmperorGrannelInfinityVJMP-JP-UR.jpg/325px-MachineEmperorGrannelInfinityVJMP-JP-UR.jpg[/img][img]http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/830/230256.jpg[/img][img]http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20101023022237/yugioh/images/thumb/b/ba/MachineEmperorWiselInfinityWJMP-JP-UR.jpg/325px-MachineEmperorWiselInfinityWJMP-JP-UR.jpg[/img] [Spoiler=Machine Emperor grannel infinity] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except from your hand when a face-up monster you control is destroyed by a card effect and sent to the Graveyard. Once per turn, you can equip 1 face-up Synchro Monster your opponent controls to this card. This card gains ATK equal to half your Life Points + the combined ATK of all Synchro Monsters equipped to this card by its own effect. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can select and Special Summon 1 Synchro Monster equipped to this card to your side of the field in face-up Defense Position.[/spoiler][spoiler=Machine Emperor Lemniscate infinity] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by its effect. When a face-up monster you control is destroyed by a card effect and sent to the Graveyard you can Special Summon this card from your hand. Once per turn, you can equip 1 face-up Synchro Monster your opponent controls to this card. This card gains ATK equal to half of the combined ATK of all Synchro Monsters equipped to this card by its own effect. Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 Synchro monster equipped to this card to negate the activation of an opponent's card effect, and destroy it.[/spoiler][spoiler=Machine emperor wisel infinity] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by its effect. When a face-up monster you control is destroyed by a card effect and sent to the Graveyard you can Special Summon this card from your hand. Once per turn, you can equip 1 face-up Synchro Monster your opponent controls to this card. This card gains ATK equal to the combined ATK of all Synchro Monsters equipped to this card by its own effect. Other monsters you control cannot declare an attack. Once per turn, you can negate the activation of an opponent's Spell Card and destroy it. [/spoiler][/spoiler] I understand what you mean about Kael though and will definitely create some sort of drawback for him, probably letting him be treated as a machine through discarding a trap or something. Knight I will weaken because yes it is slightly OPed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iceydude168 Posted November 6, 2010 Report Share Posted November 6, 2010 OCG fixes: On Infinity Colloseum (which is spelled Colosseum, btw, and should/could be a Field Spell Card), change "effected" to "affected", change "gain 500 ATK, and DEF" to just "gain 500 ATK and DEF". On "Infinity Core", the effect should read, "Up to twice per turn, when this card should be destroyed, it is not. This card cannot be destroyed by the effect of a Spell or Trap Card." (Catch the commas?) On "Machine Soldier, Kael", the effect should read "Once per turn you can discard one Trap Card from your hand to have this card gain the following Effect until your End Phase: This card is treated as Machine type in addition to it's original type." For "Machine Knight", the effect should read, "While you control 1 other "Infinity" monster, this card may attack your opponent directly. When this card attacks your opponent directly, it's ATK points become 1500, regardless of other card effects". (I altered the effect so it isn't OP'ed) "Emperors Stare" should be "Emperor's Stare", and maybe change the name to "Emperor's Wrath" or "Emperor's Fury". Also, Infinity Knight should be a higher level if it can inflict direct damage. So: OCG- 1/2 (could be better, but mostly ok) Card Effects: 7/10 (somewhat original, but OP'd) Pictures- 3/5 (resemble actual cards, but the Colosseum picture is a blatant rip-off of Star Wars, so photoshop the lightsaber dudes out) Levels/Names - 2/3 (OP'd for the levels, make some of their levels higher, but names are quite original and nice-sounding, minus aforementioned "Emperor's Stare") [b]Overall: 13/20 or 65%[/b] These cards show potential, just polish them up a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ignis avis Posted November 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 6, 2010 I just picked the colosseum pic up from Jazin Kay's gallery. The original was bigger, and didn't look like starwars. Although shrunken I agree it does. Edit: Updated cards in first post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlienHero22 Posted November 6, 2010 Report Share Posted November 6, 2010 Pretty sure I've seen that trap card infinity chain somewhere......o yea it was a card called synchro lock and it is posted somewhere the only thing different about the two is the name. Very Original though...NOT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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