Absolute Shadow Set

[Megas Ycarus]

This card set is designed to be extremely powerful, but also balanced at the cost of many Life Points. This is an advanced card set that i have started a few weeks ago. The card descriptions part was very easy. My problem was to find decent images to put on these cards. Now, enjoy the Absolute Shadow ! (3/40)

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Effects:
Absolute Shadow Winged Elder: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by tributing 3 Dragon-Type monsters on your side of the Field. During your Standby Phase, pay 500 Life Points. If you do not, this card is destroyed. After the second turn that you Summoned this card, you can tribute it in order to Special Summon "Absolute Shadow Nightmare Knight" from your Hand or your Deck.

Absolute Shadow Nightmare Knight: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Absolute Shadow Winged Elder". This card cannot be destroyed by the effect of Spell Cards, Trap Cards and Monster's Effects. If this card would be destroyed as a result of battle, you can pay 2000 Life Points to destroy the attacking monster instead.

The Dark Moon: Pay 2000 Life Points. Cards on field are removed from play instead being sent to the Graveyard (this effect cannot be negated). You can play half of your Life Points to remove from play all cards on the field, your hand and your opponent's hand (except this card). If this card is destroyed, inflict 2000 Life Points damage to the player that destroyed this card. If this effect is activated, the payer that destroyed this card draws 10 cards from his deck and remove from play all Monsters on his hand.

[center]Comments and suggestions are welcome.[/center]

[Embittered Moon]

wow, that's really good for a new member.
[b][u]RATE[/u][/b]

Winged Elder
balance- a bit up, maybe have it tribute 2 Dragons, or remove from play 4 DARK monsters or something. Not really though, because Nightmare Knight is wicked freaking powerfull.
ocg fix - This card cannot be Normal Summoned [b]or Set[/b]. This card can only be Special Summoned by tributing 3 [b]Dragon-Type monsters on your side of the Field.[/b] During your Standby Phase, pay 500 Life Points. If you do not, [b]this card is destroyed[/b]. After the second turn [b]that[/b] you Summoned this card, you can tribute it in order to [b]Special Summon "Absolute Shadow Nightmare Knight" from your Hand/Deck/both/Ireally don't know where you're trying to summon it from, please specify.[/b] overall, 8/10 its pretty good for a new member.
look/pic - 8.5/10 it looks pretty epic, but not as epic as some that i have seen.
originality - a lot of cards are summoned like this, so 6.5/10
OVERALL-MAYBE A 7/10 OR 7.5/10

Nightmare Knight (The name is epic, because i love allitteration.)
balance - ok, this is wayyyy to powerfull. if i were you i'd scratch the effect that it can't be targeted by Spells or Traps, maybe just monsters. also, take its ATK down to like 3500 or lower.
ocg fix - Normal Summoned or Set again; Destroyed as a result of battle (sorry for not doing a full fix and being lazy.)
look/pic - sweet. 9/10.
originality - also seen a lot of monsters like this card. 7/10 though.
OVERALL - 6/10 because its wayyyyy too powerfull.

[color="#4B0082"][font="Impact"][size="6"][i][b]OVERALL RATING ON ALL CARDS-6.5/10 KEEP MAKING CARDS, I CAN SEE YOU BECOMING WAY BETTER IN THE FUTURE.[/b][/i][/size][/font][/color]

(((I am TERRIBLE at ocg, so don't take my opinion with a grain of salt.)))

[Megas Ycarus]

Thanks for the feedback Brooklan. Nerfing the cards now

Spell Card added