Doom_Shaman Posted November 7, 2010 Report Share Posted November 7, 2010 should i use its current effect or the fun effect scheath suggested: If this card attacks a monster your opponent controls, destroy all monsters that are in the same Position as the attacked target except this card after the Damage Calculation. This card lose 100 ATK and DEF for each monster destroyed by this effect. If this card is attacked by a DARK monster your opponent control , destroy this card and that monster then draw 2 cards [img]http://img600.imageshack.us/img600/8020/106350p.jpg[/img] EDITED* its not Gnishleh at all no more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snowyash Posted November 7, 2010 Report Share Posted November 7, 2010 Going to try a new rating system for this. Name: WTF? I decree it be pronounced [i]Nisleh[/i]. Always thought Primevil = Primeval though. 3/5 Pic: Primevil + Light Attribut + This Pic = Not making sense. 2/5 Stats: With that sort of card, it doesn't really matter but I think ATK should be higher. 3/5 OCG: Battle Position = Position (I think anyway) 4/5 Creativity: Seems like a generic sort of card, not really an original feel to it. 6/10 Effect: Best part of the card IMO. Nice stall breaker. 8/10 26/40 = 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom_Shaman Posted November 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 7, 2010 rofl. ill work on name and spelling. lots of bright yellows = light attribute. primeval slayer just popped into my head umm it used to be Battle Position, idk if konami changed its mind. ill up the ATK to 37 and i was looking for a basic effect that works. so ill take the lower rate for hitting the nail on the head there Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CNo.101 S.H. Death Knight Posted November 7, 2010 Report Share Posted November 7, 2010 Name: 2.5/5 the name sound to bland. Pic: 4/5 i like the picture alot Effect: 4.5/5 hmm it will die by its own power? so suicidal. OCG: 3/5 the "battle" is no longer exist i the grammar, and "all cards" should be all monster(s) the ATK is not bad but the DEF is too high for an easy summoned Synchro Monster and with no drawback. you should make it like this Name: Seraphic Berserker Attribute: LIGHT Type: Warrior Level: 10 ATK: 3500 DEF: 2800 Effect: If this card attack a monster your opponent control, destroy all monsters that are in the same Position as the attacked target except this card after the Damage Calculation. This card lose 100 ATK and DEF for each monster destroyed by this effect. If this card is attacked by a DARK monster your opponent control , destroy this card and that monster then draw 2 cards." this is an suggestion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom_Shaman Posted November 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 7, 2010 i LOVE that name ive taken into consideration your ocg corrections and DEF seggestions and tweaked it a bit. i wanna see what other people think about the effect you suggested. i like it but im gunna see what the rest of our fun little community thinks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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