ff00I Posted November 7, 2010 Report Share Posted November 7, 2010 my first card in quite a while. help me correct it [img]http://img825.imageshack.us/img825/5730/196765.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom_Shaman Posted November 7, 2010 Report Share Posted November 7, 2010 "Once during each 2nd Battle Phase you must pay 1000 Life Points and select 1 Face-Up monster you control. The selected monster may attack your opponents Life Points directly and must attack this turn." ?? not sure about the ocg on the last part so ill leave that to you, but i think thats a little more towards what your going for cool effect tho 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted November 7, 2010 Report Share Posted November 7, 2010 a little help on OCG: one = 1 type = Type Doom..why you capitalize "face-up" ? I dunno + 500 ATK + Attacking directly. This is kinda powerful. BTW..do you mean, Spellcaster and Fairy-Type's can attack directly...or each type of monster as long as you control it..its allowed to attack directly for 750 LP's? If not..you should add "A Spellcaster or Fairy-Type monster you control can attack [...]" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom_Shaman Posted November 7, 2010 Report Share Posted November 7, 2010 ^valid facts^ i cap face-up because when i learned to play 8 years ago it was proper ocg dont forget im a vet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shadow of Alpha~ Posted November 7, 2010 Report Share Posted November 7, 2010 [center]Ok, I'll just correct the OCG ignoring the fact that it's [b]WAY[/b] to powerful... [b]Increase the ATK and DEF of all Fairy and Spellcaster-Type monsters by 500. Once every 2nd Battle Phase, you can pay 750 Life Points and select 1 monster on your side of the field. The selected monster can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. No other monsters can declare an attack this turn.[/b][/center] Suggestion for improval: [b]- Decrease the amount of ATK and DEF points they gain, or only increase 1 of them. F.ex: Increase the DEF (or ATK) of all Fairy and Spellcaster-Tyoe monsters on the field by 300. - Increase the payment, f.ex: Once every 2nd Battle Phase, you can pay 1000 (or more) Life Points........ [/b] I think that the last part is a good balancer, the part that says that no other monsters can attack. [b]Try this: Increase the ATK and DEF of all Fairy and Spellcaster-Type monsters by 300. Once every 2nd Battle Phase, you can pay 1000 Life Points and select 1 monster on your side of the field. The selected monster can attack your opponents Life Points directly this turn. No other monsters can declare an attack this turn.[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ff00I Posted November 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 7, 2010 [img]http://img825.imageshack.us/img825/4004/196765s.jpg[/img] this should improve it then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shadow of Alpha~ Posted November 7, 2010 Report Share Posted November 7, 2010 Love it 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom_Shaman Posted November 8, 2010 Report Share Posted November 8, 2010 much better. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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