Y.M.R.creator Posted November 7, 2010 Report Share Posted November 7, 2010 Please rate and comment: [img]http://img600.imageshack.us/img600/8001/269971h.jpg[/img] [img]http://img825.imageshack.us/img825/9134/269971md.jpg[/img] [img]http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/9396/269971.jpg[/img] [img]http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/5087/269971n.jpg[/img] [img]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/3383/269971g.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom_Shaman Posted November 7, 2010 Report Share Posted November 7, 2010 umm, kinda unsupported. no level 4 monsters at all, makes this a difficult archtype to work with. a small bit of advice tho, try to make an archtype that generally works toward one goal, or just has a common effect, for example lightsworn cards all mill. individually these arent too bad. a couple of the pics leave something to be desired but still a fairly solid IRL set. on here im afraid itll meet much harsher criticsm than mine 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted November 7, 2010 Report Share Posted November 7, 2010 The pics - Are no good They dont look YGO'ish Since your a newb, i wont rate the OCG The cards sure are balanced. that's a + The effects are unoriginal and i agree with Doom_Shaman. A Archetype should have some special ability. These are just random effects But i do like your balance - and these cards arent too bad for a newbie.. Keep it up - with some experience you might have chances to become a very good cardmaker but i cant leave a rating for those. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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