first try at making giga bowser

[Piercer of the Heavens]

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[jr junior]

Alright, I must admit, you have pretty good OCG (Official Card Grammar) for a newcomer! That alone is a good foundation for learning new OCG. But... It is really hard to Summon Giga Bowser since both the technically Fusion Materials (Bowser and Master Hand) need two tributes each, so it's also quite difficult to Summon those two cards. On a happier note, Giga Bowser's effect is decently useful and balanced! It's useful in the sense that it can destroy an opponent's monster or a suspicious and daunting face-down card and it's balanced in the sense that it is activated at the end of the turn. As for Master Hand, with his effect technically allows himself to gain 500 points each turn, so the effect then becomes OPd but it can help those monsters whose effect requires them to destroy a monster and/or inflict Battle Damage.

Suggestions:

First of all, you should really give Bowser an effect. Maybe give it an effect that supports the Special Summon of Giga Bowser since Giga Bowser is already hard to Summon. I don't have any problems with Giga Bowser's effect though except that maybe you should make it more creative or elaborative.

You should also make Master Hand more balanced. You should try specifying its effect to only increasing the ATK of [i]other[/i] monsters on the field. Also make the ATK gain last until the end of the turn to make it more balanced.

OCG Corrections:

Giga Bowser:

"Bowser" + "Master Hand"

This card can only be Special Summoned from the Extra Deck by sending the above Fusion Material Monsters from the field to the Graveyard. (You do not use "Polymerization".) Once per turn, during your End Phase, you can destroy 1 card on the field.

Master Hand:

Once per turn, you can increase the ATK of a face-up monster on the field by 500 points.

...a more balanced effect would be...

Once per turn, you can increase the ATK of another face-up monster on the field by 500 points until the end of this turn.

[Starly_64]

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Alright, I must admit, you have pretty good OCG (Official Card Grammar) for a newcomer! That alone is a good foundation for learning new OCG. But... It is really hard to Summon Giga Bowser since both the technically Fusion Materials (Bowser and Master Hand) need two tributes each, so it's also quite difficult to Summon those two cards. On a happier note, Giga Bowser's effect is decently useful and balanced! It's useful in the sense that it can destroy an opponent's monster or a suspicious and daunting face-down card and it's balanced in the sense that it is activated at the end of the turn. As for Master Hand, with his effect technically allows himself to gain 500 points each turn, so the effect then becomes OPd but it can help those monsters whose effect requires them to destroy a monster and/or inflict Battle Damage.

Suggestions:

First of all, you should really give Bowser an effect. Maybe give it an effect that supports the Special Summon of Giga Bowser since Giga Bowser is already hard to Summon. I don't have any problems with Giga Bowser's effect though except that maybe you should make it more creative or elaborative.

You should also make Master Hand more balanced. You should try specifying its effect to only increasing the ATK of [i]other[/i] monsters on the field. Also make the ATK gain last until the end of the turn to make it more balanced.

OCG Corrections:

Giga Bowser:

"Bowser" + "Master Hand"

This card can only be Special Summoned from the Extra Deck by sending the above Fusion Material Monsters from the field to the Graveyard. (You do not use "Polymerization".) Once per turn, during your End Phase, you can destroy 1 card on the field.

Master Hand:

Once per turn, you can increase the ATK of a face-up monster on the field by 500 points.

...a more balanced effect would be...

Once per turn, you can increase the ATK of another face-up monster on the field by 500 points until the end of this turn.
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I agree with everything this user has said.

[krazyxgamer]

i think master hand can have more of a unique effect but it's fine i guess

[Cosmic Destroyer of Tea]

Nice and originally...
Good cards ,dude.