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[M.B X] [Pre-Release] Midori Dragon


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  1. 1. Does this card need improvement? (if so then please reply and explain why that is)

    • Yes it does.
    • No it does not.
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[size="1"][center]~[b]M.B X[/b]~[/center]

[center]~[b][color="#FF0000"]Please make sure to read thru the entire post, thank you[/color][/b]~[/center]

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[b]Artwork:[/b] A Green Chinese Dragon! And the Background+Effects are by Me.

[b]Description:[/b]
1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters
This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell Cards. When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard by your opponent's card (either by battle or by card effect), you can pay 800 Life Points to Special Summon it from the Graveyard. If you do, remove this card from play when it is removed from the field.

[b]Template:[/b] Made by Me.

[b]Note: [/b] Alright, come on guys i really need some help with this one, this is only a preview/test to know if the card is broken/balanced/good/bad etc.. So any Rates/Comments/Critics OR Feedback of any kind at all is very appreciated(just dont leave me hanging). I will post the finished improved card later, if i get some good advice that is. Oh! And just so that you know i do +REP people who help and give some actual CnC.

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Thanks man, but i kinda asked for some help with the card, you didn't even bother to point out anything, i mean its not perfect, even if it was you can say so cant you?

Anyway, come guys i feel like am being hated here for some reason :blink: I could use some advice on what to improve, is it broken? balanced? Both?!!, because am just wondering what you guys think of it, i mean its pretty unique IMO. And a unique card deserve some more/better replies, no?

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[quote name='M.B X' timestamp='1289265767' post='4773054']
Thanks man, but i kinda asked for some help with the card, you didn't even bother to point out anything, i mean its not perfect, even if it was you can say so cant you?

Anyway, come guys i feel like am being hated here for some reason :blink: I could use some advice on what to improve, is it broken? balanced? Both?!!, because am just wondering what you guys think of it, i mean its pretty unique IMO. And a unique card deserve some more/better replies, no?

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if you want etter than how would you like it in[size="7"] 3-D![/size]

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Alright, time to put my new rating system to work!
Pic: I'm not a fan of the all green pic, but it does work. 1/1
Effect: Very good and balanced, can't find any problems. 4/4
OCG: I can't find anything. 2/2
Creativity: Unique effect, it just seems a little lacking with the slightly below average stats. 2/3
Other notes: I think you might be able to get away with a little boost on the stats or a slight upgrade on the effect, and I think FIRE or WIND would suit this guy better than LIGHT.
Overall: 9/10
I like it quite a bit, but like I said earlier, you could get away with some small power-ups.
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[quote name='Metagross386' timestamp='1289279055' post='4773702']
Alright, time to put my new rating system to work!
Pic: I'm not a fan of the all green pic, but it does work. 1/1
Effect: Very good and balanced, can't find any problems. 4/4
OCG: I can't find anything. 2/2
Creativity: Unique effect, it just seems a little lacking with the slightly below average stats. 2/3
Other notes: I think you might be able to get away with a little boost on the stats or a slight upgrade on the effect, and I think FIRE or WIND would suit this guy better than LIGHT.
Overall: 9/10
I like it quite a bit, but like I said earlier, you could get away with some small power-ups.
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Alright, thanx dude. But I dont think Ill change anything, i tried as much possible to make it unique and in the same time balanced so power-ups like raising ATK and/or Level will definitely ruin its uniqueness, got it? get it? Good.

Again guys i still really need that review, a full helpful review would be extremely nice and who ever does it will for sure get a +REP or 2 ;)

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[color=blue][b]Midori Dragon[/b][/color]

[b]OCG / Common Sense:[/b]
OCG is flawless. No errors whatsoever.

[b]Effect / Originality:[/b]
Quite odd with somewhat of the poor stats for a Level 8 in my opinion. Lets see if the effect makes that okay.The card right off the bat is unaffected by Spell Cards. Making Enemy Controller, Mind Control, Dark Hole, etc. not a threat to this card. It kinda fits with the card's image as well, which I like. When the card gets destroyed, and the cost of 800, you can get it back onto the field, except when removed from the field, it's removed from play. The concepts work well together, but not the most original.

[b]Usefulness / Balance:[/b]
The card may have some uses, but the effect isn't worthy of the poor-ish stats. I'm not saying it isn't useful as of right now, it's just that I somewhat not impressed by the stats. Perhaps when it is Summoned a second time through it's effect, it's original ATK and DEF become 2800? Makes it a tad more unique, and you get yourself a free beater during the second time. For now, balance is alright, seeing I'm not sure if this would be considered underpowered or not, but it's a good card.

[b]Ratings:[/b]
OCG / Common Sense: 2/2
Effect / Originality: 3.5/4
Usefulness / Balance: 3.6/4
[b]Overall: 9.1/10[/b]
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It's a tad underpowered but nevertheless very good. Grabs you a little field control but its stats are measly compared to some other great cards. I think, Synchro monsters especially, need a supportive effect. Compare it to Stardust Dragon for example:

[center][img]http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100723074018/yugioh/images/thumb/1/1b/StardustDragonDP08-EN-SR-1E.jpg/272px-StardustDragonDP08-EN-SR-1E.jpg[/img][/center]

Stardust has an extra 100 points and is one Level lower than Midori Dragon. Defense is a little less relevant as a good boss monster could smash through both cards. Midori doesn't have a viable effect to make it useable. Its' immunity to Spell cards is quite useful but Stardust Negation>Midori Immunity. [b]I'd either make it stronger or add an extra effect.[/b]

Also compare it to Horus Lv 6:

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It has the same immunity effect but is an infinitely easier to summon and will give you very quick access to the all-powerful Horus Lv 8. Lv 8 has an effect to literally obliterate a quarter/third of your opponent's cards as it can negate and destroy the effect of any and all Spell Cards.
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