A Chaos Card

[snowyash]

I really need to get back in the swing of making cards.

I suppose you could run it in a Fabled World, but it's probably broken. Tried to balance it with an extra LIGHT/DARK removed from play to summon. Oh well, please comment.

[img]http://img836.imageshack.us/img836/1439/298805.jpg[/img]
[b]Lore[/b]
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 2 LIGHT and 2 DARK monsters in your Graveyard from play. Once per turn, you can discard 1 LIGHT or 1 DARK monster in your hand to remove 1 face-up monster on the field from play.

Hate/Rate but try to be constructive.

[FTW (For The Wynn)]

I actually think this guy is UP'd. Sure, he's easy enough to summon and everything, but you still lose 4 cards just to summon him and more cards to use his effect...I would recommend adding an effect similar to [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Extreme_Fighting_Machine_King_Valvaroid"]this guy's effect[/url], except without the 1000 damage part.

[snowyash]

[quote name='FTW (For The Wynn)' timestamp='1289235963' post='4771611']
I actually think this guy is UP'd. Sure, he's easy enough to summon and everything, but you still lose 4 cards just to summon him and more cards to use his effect...I would recommend adding an effect similar to [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Extreme_Fighting_Machine_King_Valvaroid"]this guy's effect[/url], except without the 1000 damage part.
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I'm still not so sure, I had a Fabled World deck in mind when making him. I saw potentially a couple of LIGHT/DARK monsters in the graveyard cause of all the discard effects that are run, from there, an almost free Special Summon plus a chance of discarding a Dark World monster and an attack as well.

Either that made sense or I'm terribly confused.

[FTW (For The Wynn)]

Actually, I was thinking a Lightsworn Blackwing hybrid deck, but I also thought about those as well. I'm not too good with the Fabled archetype unfortunately, but this could be useful still. I'll look into it a bit.

[Brimtosis]

I would have to agree. This card's effect is a bit under powered. Chaos Sorcerer is a bit better than this card, but it is uesful when it gets out. couldn't run it in a full on deck, but can be very good, as its effect doesn't stop it from fighting. Just some tweeks here and there, and you have a great card.

[Big Lez]

[quote name='FTW (For The Wynn)' timestamp='1289235963' post='4771611']
I actually think this guy is UP'd. Sure, he's easy enough to summon and everything, but you still lose 4 cards just to summon him and more cards to use his effect...I would recommend adding an effect similar to [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Extreme_Fighting_Machine_King_Valvaroid"]this guy's effect[/url], except without the 1000 damage part.
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Ever since removed from play cards arent removed from play anymore (??? hope you get me xD) losing 4 cards isnt that bad


You hit the fabled special power..discarding a card to activate an effect..That's enough to be helpful in a Fabled deck.
+ this thing is called Chaos General. And many Cards with Chaos in their name work with removed from play cards..so this might also be good

i kinda like this card. even if the effect isnt that original

(BTW - if this would be an archetype. And you would have more monsters, that are summoned like this. The discarding effect would be awesome + they could be treated as DARK and LIGHT at the same time..this would also be great..)

PS: have you thought about Chaos Sorcerer, while creating this card?

Overall 6.5/10

[snowyash]

[quote name='Dr.Gentle' timestamp='1289237342' post='4771672']
Ever since removed from play cards arent removed from play anymore (??? hope you get me xD) losing 4 cards isnt that bad


You hit the fabled special power..discarding a card to activate an effect..That's enough to be helpful in a Fabled deck.
+ this thing is called Chaos General. And many Cards with Chaos in their name work with removed from play cards..so this might also be good

i kinda like this card. even if the effect isnt that original

(BTW - if this would be an archetype. And you would have more monsters, that are summoned like this. The discarding effect would be awesome + they could be treated as DARK and LIGHT at the same time..this would also be great..)

PS: have you thought about Chaos Sorcerer, while creating this card?

Overall 6.5/10
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I did think about Chaos Sorceror. I tried to make a better version that wouldn't be insta-banned. I referenced Chaos Sorceror in the title. And I stole the bulk of the effect from Sorceror for my card to avoid ruining the OCG.

I don't think I'll make an Archetype out of it though. I've already got two that I've stopped working on.

[snowyash]

BUMPED

[lewis atherton]

name - based on the title could be more creative saying that at leat you havn't used knight or warrior for the billionth time so 8/10.
Picture - The picture is really good for the card name and effect infact it could be legit 10/10
Effect - Its quite hard to summon so thats fair and the effect is ok for an eight stared monster so 7/10
Balance - the balance is good and its not op'd so 10/10
Playability - its playable but wont work in every deck plus you need the correct cards in your grave and in your hand to use the effect 6/10

overall 41/50 or 82/100

Tbh its about the best your gonna get for a chaos card so well done perhaps now create some spell/trap cards to go with it to make it easier to summon.

[snowyash]

Thanks for the detail. Although I disagree about the playability. If I made it easier to summon/use, it would be very OP'd.

+rep for the review.

[snowyash]

BUMP

[snowyash]

Bump?