-Zombies Will Eat You-

[♠>:Stick-Man:<♠]

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[size="3"][b]Story:[/b][/size]
[font="Georgia"][i]It's been many years since the diabolical "Master of the Dead" has been locked up, until many worshipers came to his aid and freed him from the gates of hell. He has made those who helped him by giving them powers and promoting them to his "Undead" general and leaders of his "Undead" zombie horde. Will they triumph over the world, destroy all things in their way, and teari apart the innocent and fighters, we will see...[/i][/font]

[b][size="3"]Set Info:[/size][/b]
[i]Arche Type Name - Undead
Set Effects - Increase in ATK, Special Summoning monsters, and inflicting damage.
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[spoiler=Undead Dragons]
[img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/1349/211082.jpg[/img]
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set except by removing from play 5 cards from your Graveyard. When this card is Successfully Summoned, destroy all monsters on the field, inflict 300 damage to your opponent for each card destroyed by this card's effect. Once per turn, you can discard 1 "Undead" monster from your hand to destroy 1 face-down Spell, Trap, or Monster Card on the field. This card cannot declare an attack on the turn the effect was used.
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[spoiler=Undead Beasts]
[img]http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/1349/211082.jpg[/img]
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[spoiler=Undead Dinosaurs]
[img]http://img600.imageshack.us/img600/1349/211082.jpg[/img]
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[spoiler=Undead Warriors]
[img]http://img837.imageshack.us/img837/9935/211082c.jpg[/img]
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[Sarius_of_Wind]

perfect i would buy this if i had some money

heres one of mines

[img]http://img837.imageshack.us/img837/4780/302447.jpg[/img]

[snowyash]

[quote name='BLAZING ZERKER' timestamp='1289260009' post='4772666']
perfect i would buy this if i had some money

heres one of mines

[img]http://img837.imageshack.us/img837/4780/302447.jpg[/img]
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You're not supposed to post your cards in someone elses thread.

[♠>:Stick-Man:<♠]

Yes one thing, you don't post your cards on someone else's thread but thanks for the "perfect". And might as well since you posted it, I give it a 7 because no fake-types and many OCG errors, besides that good picture and i like that it's a fusion card.

New card.

[♠>:Stick-Man:<♠]

Editing and creating in process.

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

Just a slight note~
It's Archetype >< not Arche Type... But unimportant.

The archetype is nothing incredibly unique. Just akward zombies. Akward meaning they don't have the general Zombie effects. Zombies don't usually gain ATK.

Now Card 1 is rather UP. Zombies are better in the Graveyard, why remove them? Yes there are some benefits to removing but 5? To summon something that I could just run DAD over? Meh, I'd stick to DAD. Burn is good though.

Card 2 has very low playability. In Archetypes, it's usually a terrible idea narrowing Summoning requirements down to just monsters in the Archetype in question. It makes it less playable in other decks. Card 2 wouldn't be seen in any Zombie decks that weren't Undead based. Also since you are lacking standard lower level monsters, this set's structure has no base and therefore will crumble. Also, the burn could be better and it's last effect will never come to throughition. To be able to inflict 2000 damage, you'd need to destroy a level 20 monster, which don't exist.

Card 3 the least playable of the 3. It's UP HUGELY as well. 1 You have no standard base support for this Archetype therefore it will never lauch off the ground. The only monster that has a hope of starting this set off is your Beast but even he cant be summoned because you are lacking base structure. Not worth the summon. Jurracs and Laval's get better boosts.

[♠>:Stick-Man:<♠]

Thanks for all the criticism, but I'll change everything as i proceed with the thread, i just do quick cards then actually look at there effects if they are playable or effective later after creating a couple of zombie cards an low level monsters as you say.
But Zombie-Type monsters don't all have to have general effects, after all these are made up cards, so that's why i'm boosting ATK, cause i love power too.
But overall i'll change them later, thanks again for the criticism
P.S. Your cute.

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

It's fine :3 I just hope to see some Level 4 monsters soon D: cause their [b]VERY[/b] important to archetypes that have effects specific to the archetype. >> Sorry if I sound cruel or mean when I comment >< Cant help it >>. You dont have to change much or anything at that just add some good support and structure base. Also >> I'm the [b][size="3"]Self-Proclaimed Archetype Queen[/b][/size]

Lol thanks ^^

Your new card's playability is still low. It's level 5 meaning it needs a plausable tribute which these days, most Zombie Decks actually do better without tributing. Not only that but other cards that are Level [b]4[/b] can [b]permenantly[/b] gain ATK while their on the field higher than this. It's other effect is honestly terrible. Remove for Zombies is bad and I see no support for Zombie Removal here so its still a bad idea. Also it's quite unlikely for it to destroy 2 monster unless you use cards like Double Attack which makes no sense, and even then why would you remove 2 Undead monsters in your Graveyard from play just to boost the ATK to 2400? It'll probably have been eliminated by then. Also you have no Undead monsters that can make it to the Grave other than through Hand Destruction and Card Destruction.

With out Base Structure, this Archetype is near impossible to use.

[♠>:Stick-Man:<♠]

Chill chill, will add "Base Structure" later. Just wait a little bit Lovely

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

>< Figured I sounded mean. Edited my second comment >>

[angel killer315]

why is the dragon a warrior and the rest are zombie types????