Master White Posted November 9, 2010 Report Share Posted November 9, 2010 Thanks Yin for the renders, but it is still just a test run to see if it is good or bad and what I should Do. Please use Constructive Criticism, Thanks. Well, I hope it looks okay. Third Sparkman Render Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted November 9, 2010 Report Share Posted November 9, 2010 Too messy... And the 5D's logo looks terrible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master White Posted November 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 9, 2010 Yea, I couldn't Find another 5ds logo, and too messy? you mean its crowded or too many colors? I could understand both. Keep in mind, I'm just making it for me to use in Real Life. So the only importance is HD and Coolness. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted November 9, 2010 Report Share Posted November 9, 2010 Yeah, it's way too colourful. And crowded. And you can't even really see their faces. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest .:Overdrive:. Posted November 9, 2010 Report Share Posted November 9, 2010 Well:• Actually, renders do not fit the BG really. Also, what's that behind the left Sparkman. Nephtys?• Looks like a copy-paste job.• The "Konami" text in top left corner and the text in down right corner are kind of...huh...I want to say that they do not exist in RL playmats (Or if they do, they're not fitting).• As Mia said, 5D's logo looks stretched and bad. Also that text under the logo is also not fitting.• The fields look good imo... My advice:• Add some effects and stuff. Also, try to fit the renders and the BG.• There are some good 5D's logo renders. I guess that Sparkman renders are from Yin =D. Just some advices and CnC-ing. I hope you'll give more effort and that you'll make more playmats...:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mugendramon Posted November 9, 2010 Report Share Posted November 9, 2010 what's that behind the left Sparkman. It's the effect monster Version of "The Winged Dragon of Ra". Don't really see where that fits, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master White Posted November 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 9, 2010 That third Sparkman is Something I created, so please b a little more curteos. Monkey is right, it is the signed version of winged dragon of ra wings attached to Sparkman, and I thought it looked cool. Third Sparkman Picture is in the first post. @OverDrive: I had to shrink it down, b/c I had it so big that Imagshack couldn't upload it, so thats why the renders and stuff look smushed and it all looks bad. You might want to go buy a structure deck, b/c those words and etc do belong on a playmat, b/c I own a few, so I should know. The renders are from Yin, and I thank yin very much for them. Add effects, like what, to make it look more of an unusable play matt, b/c if added in lighting effects, and all that, then the computer that prints them off wouldn't pick it up, so it'd look ugly. Or add in some cool and unusual effects just b/c it don't look all that great without them. Well, hate to break it to you, but some play mats use no effects, just the awesomeness of printing and thats what I am going for, is to make a cool playmat without using lighting, shadowing, or any other special effects. Can someone provide a link to the 5ds Render logos, b/c I searched and nothing happened, I just got white logo stuff, and all small logos. So, I will make a different one, but you know I won't print it off b/c of all the factors pointing to that reason. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mugendramon Posted November 9, 2010 Report Share Posted November 9, 2010 Monkey is right, it is the signed version of winged dragon of ra wings attached to Sparkman, and I thought it looked cool. Third Sparkman Picture is in the first post. I can actually see Ra's head quite clearly, White. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master White Posted November 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 9, 2010 @Monkey: How, I took the head out, that is ra's Hand that is attached to the wing, I think it looks kinda funny, I know, but yea, its Ra's Hands, not the head, but thats alright. I think I'll just stick with merging yugioh and pokemon cards to create new monsters, so would someone please lock this, thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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