Zombie Fish

[Piercer of the Heavens]

[img]http://img827.imageshack.us/img827/3131/37656.jpg[/img]
LORE: This card is also treated as a Dark attribute monster. This card is also treated as a Fish type monster. You can Special Summon this card by removing from play 1 Zombie type monster and one Water type monster. Once per turn you remove from play one Water or Zombie type monster and increase your life points by the same as the monster's ATK points.

Was originally suppose to be a zombie mermaid for the effect can fit more but i couldn't find one so
if any body has a good pick can you tell me.

[lewis atherton]

Im gonna give my honest opinion of this card.
Name - average it is what it says though not to interesting. especially with it being an 8 star monster, and as the levels go up usually so does the complexity of the name over all 6/10 here are some of my possible suggestions "undead bonefish" or "resurected dead marine"

Picture - average yet again I suggest something more mutated or perhaps even shark like although the picture does have a certain charisma that perhaps would be to overstated for a lower-level moster anyway 7/10 also the blood seems a little powerful for a yugioh card and so may not be used.

Effect - the effect is actually really original to my knowlidge and i like the fact it increases life points for the attack poins as if it were defense points for zombies you be lucky to get any life point increase as most defense are very low or 0. 9/10.

Stats Balance - I have a problem with the defense being higher then the atc since its a zombie also the picture suggests the def should be 0. Then if the def is 0 the atc should e about 3300. as is balance is good but doesnt match the picture

Overall I think for a newbie its very good. and its also fairly creative good keep trying and you'll get their eventually may i suggest you make a powerup spell for this card