Black-Winged Dragon Variations and other cards

[Aa'une]

I know they're a bit overpowered but just look at other variations. I haven't made cards in a while so they might have quite a bit of OCG errors. Also included are two extras

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[center]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned with "Assault Mode Activate". When your opponent activates a card that would inflict damage to your life points or activates a card effect that would destroy a card(s) you control, you can negate the activation of that card and destroy that card. Then place 1 Black Feather counter on this card (max 4). This card loses 800 ATK for Each Black Feather counter on this card. You can remove all Black Feather counters from this card to destroy a number of cards your opponent controls equal to the number of counters removed. Then inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the the number of cards destroyed x800. When this card on the field is destroyed, you can Special Summon 1 "Black-Winged Dragon" from your Graveyard.[/center]

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[center]1 Tuner Synchro Monster + 1 non-tuner + "Black-Winged Dragon"
Once per turn you can activate one of the following effects.
- When an opponent's monster declares an attack, you can remove from play this card to negate the attack. If you negate an attack this way, Special Summon this card during the End Phase.
- You can remove from play 1 monster on the field and the owner of that card can draw 1 card.
- You can remove from play 1 monster on your side of the field and 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field, and remove from play 1 card in your opponent's hand.
- Negate the effect of a Spell Card, Trap Card, or Monster Card and remove it from play. Then This card gains the destroyed card's effect until the end phase.[/center]

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[center]This card can only be Special Summoned from the Extra Deck by the effect of "Blackwin Swarm". When this card is Special Summoned you can special summon 1 "Blackwing" monster from your Graveyard with 1300 ATK or less.[/center]

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[center]You can Special Summon 1 Level 6 or lower "Blackwing" monster from your Deck, Hand, Graveyard, or Extra Deck. The Special Summoned monster is destroyed during your next End Phase. The Special Summoned monster cannot declare an attack.[/center]

So comment, rate, offer suggestions thank you.

[Aa'une]

Bump........

[BlackWindDragon]

My comments:
Blackwing Dragon/Assault mode: Effect is fine, picture could be different, doesnt really fit as the assault form for a half bird, half dragon creature.
Black Hole Dragon: Summoning conditions are like a combo between something that needs a Synchro tuner and a "Majestic" monster. i say pic one or the other, but not both. and 4 different effects is a bit to much. as a cosmic synchro monster, i think its mainly 3 effects.
Blackwing - Chinka the Blue Mist: fail as a Synchro monster. if your going to have a Synchro tuner, it has to be at least a level 2. Level 1 synchro monsters make no sense, and its summoning conditions are nothing like that of a Synchro monster
Blackwing Swarm: Only card that actually is normal, almost a saving grace to the Set.
overall, maybe a 5/10