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Bahamut - Envoy of the End Posted November 15, 2010 Report Share Posted November 15, 2010 Punctuation is over-rated. Anyway the cards themselves, when you say 'this monster can not be in defense position', so what happens if I activate 'Block Attack' or 'Stumbling' as a basic example? Is my card negated, or should you monster be destroyed by an effect of it's own? [quote]once per turn you discard your entire hand to the graveyard to send 3 cards on your opperent side of the field to his or her deck then his or deck is then shuffled during of every end phase you lose 200 life points[/quote] I think this is overpowered. Your entire hand can easily be just the one card you drew in your Draw Phase at the start of each turn. 200 Life Point loss every turn is pittance to pay, as you could easily tear through a defence with this effect until you run into 'Dark Hole' or whatever. I have no problem with the concept of the effect, just the execution. Seriously though, please use proper rules of grammer when making cards, these are quite confusing to read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted November 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2010 i fix one of them Juznork the Outer Gorbrok Reach Grand Wizard lore This monster can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Dance of the Outer Gorbrok Moon". You must also offer monsters whose total Level Stars equal 8 or more as a Tribute from the field or your hand this monster can only be in attack position once per turn you can remove from play 1 Outer Gorbork Reach Sychro Monster to have Juznork the Outer Gorbrok Reach Grand Wizard gain attack equal to that Outer Gorbrok Reach Sychro Monster's orginal attack til end of turn once per turn you Juznork the Outer Gorbrok Reach Grand Wizard attack points 0 until end of turn to have your opponert send 2 cards form his or her hand to top of his or her deck during every end phase you lose 800 life points look im not the best at ocg plus all the one that said this monster can not ve in deffense positon what i meant to say was this monster can only be in attack position if you guys can help me out with the ocg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Starrk Posted November 16, 2010 Report Share Posted November 16, 2010 NO. The OCG is terrible. The pics aren't great at all. :/ I'm not going to rate OCG because there is so much to redo. 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smesh Posted November 16, 2010 Report Share Posted November 16, 2010 When making cards, do you think about playability? Think "Why would I want this in my deck?" If you do that, you'll realize these cards are unplayable and not worth it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted November 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2010 please help with ocg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smesh Posted November 16, 2010 Report Share Posted November 16, 2010 http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/162252-commonly-used-ocg-phrases/ Use that. But the OCG isn't really a big problem, it's the playability. Sure, the OCG is bad, but it doesn't really matter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted November 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2010 all of them are playable the outer gorbork reach set is about making your opperent discard cards from his hand into his deck then reshuffle his deck and making him discards form his deck to the graveyard while at the same time the other outer gorbork reach monsters effects of outer gorbork reach cards that was removed from play Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smesh Posted November 16, 2010 Report Share Posted November 16, 2010 You don't get it... I mean if you had this Deck in a duel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted November 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2010 i havent completed the entire set yet this is only a few high level guys i made i made a few lower level and other spell and traps i just hadnt post them yet that all Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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