barsam Posted January 24, 2008 Report Share Posted January 24, 2008 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
casaditymaker Posted January 24, 2008 Report Share Posted January 24, 2008 opponent is not capitilized, and there is a comma after LIGHT monster in the third line, counters aren't cap. in 4th line, it is Dark counter, not Counters.ANyways, besides OCG, it's a prety good card! 8.64/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted January 24, 2008 Report Share Posted January 24, 2008 Nice, job instead of a comma/,/ put a dash it looks better. Nice effect hope to see some Spells combo with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted January 24, 2008 Report Share Posted January 24, 2008 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 24, 2008 Report Share Posted January 24, 2008 4 + errors Not good picture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
barsam Posted January 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2008 Thanks,Anyone Else?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted January 24, 2008 Report Share Posted January 24, 2008 It's alright 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted January 25, 2008 Report Share Posted January 25, 2008 You could get a more... unique picture, but other than that, pretty good job! I see the need to improve in your card, and even though you did a good job, I think you can put a little more effort into your cards. Good job though! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 25, 2008 Report Share Posted January 25, 2008 Not great, but ok ^_^6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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