Careless Whisper Posted January 24, 2008 Report Share Posted January 24, 2008 Here are the only high level monsters within my new set. (apart from my "Dark Sound Dragon") and pls tell me which one is your favorite out of these four. mine is Sario because in the Manga, he has the widest range of elemental abilities in the entire galaxy. Sario's effect is alittle hard to read so here I'll make it larger Once per turn you may change the attribute of this card to any of your choice. This card gains the following effects depending on what attribute you choose.*FIRE-Increase the Att and Def of this card by 500 points.*Water-Select one Spell Card from either your's or your opponent's Grveyards and place it in your hand.*EARTH-Increase the Def of this card by 500 points.*LIGHT-You may look at your opponent's hand during your Main Phase 1.*DARK-Select one Trap Card in either your's or your opponent's Graveyard and place it in your hand.*WIND-Decrease the Att and Def all of monster cards on your opponent's side of the field by 500 points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 24, 2008 Report Share Posted January 24, 2008 Bad grammar Bad OCG. Pictures could be better. Nice effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted January 24, 2008 Report Share Posted January 24, 2008 In the first one you said "Destroyed" "IN" battle shouldn't it be as a result of battle or by battle? You also said ou instaid of you in the first one.Skakariswitch the A and I You get the hit latin singer, Shakira^_^, let's see if anyone else notices =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nukyasu Posted January 24, 2008 Report Share Posted January 24, 2008 yes. switch the "a" and "I" around. Nice pics but bad cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted January 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2008 No, I spelt it "Shakari" that way for a reason. I wasn't even thinking about the latin singer at all. I was thinking about Gaara from Naruto. How Shakaku was the demon within Gaara. I was also watching an Anime with a character called "Orokari" I forget what Anime it was. But that doesn't matter, I mixed th words "Shakaku" and "Orokari" together and got "Shakari" and I made it's deffinition and made a manga about it. and these pictures are very similar to what the Shakari's actually look like when they take physical form. And the effects are based on what each Shakari are able to do. Like Sario, he can use every element known to humaniy as a weapon. Anomu can use the soul of his victims and shape them into clones of himself. and Malfura is able to summon the Dark Sound Dragon. and you get the rest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted January 24, 2008 Report Share Posted January 24, 2008 Don't get me wrong I didn't mean to say that you got your idea from there, it's a good story and nice cards. I was just stating the Shakira thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted January 24, 2008 Report Share Posted January 24, 2008 eh, they're okay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted January 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2008 well once I complete the set, I'll fix all the errors. if I remember to. and now that I'm done with the 4 high level cards, I'll start making my low levels tomorrow. and Traps after that. and then magic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted January 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 25, 2008 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted January 25, 2008 Report Share Posted January 25, 2008 Work on your grammar and use of pictures, and your cards will be perfect!I see the need to improve in your cards, and even though you did a good job, I think you can put a little more effort into your cards, which will lead into you being an amazing, well known, card maker. Again, good job! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted January 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 25, 2008 why thank you Glasstin10, I'll take that to heart, when I complete the entire deck. I'll thank all who helped me, this will become my biggest accomplishment in my entire history on the YCM forums. It wouldn't be for my life. Scoring my awesome Girlfriend has taken that ranking. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted January 25, 2008 Report Share Posted January 25, 2008 I feel so happy when I help people. :) When do you think the Deck will be complete? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted January 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 25, 2008 Porbably by next week, if I work my harda$$ off atleast. But I may not be on until Saturday cuz I'm going to go see meh gf. Or she can come over here and help me come up with ideas for my deck. I just need a strategy to base it around. Normally a Shakari tries to get out of the body. and I can' exclude the Hosts. They have names too. I'll make them part of the level fours. and I need some level threes some magic cards and some traps But I need to work on monsters first. My return has only just begun. Once I finish, I'll truly find Paradise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 25, 2008 Report Share Posted January 25, 2008 I kind of like these, I really love the effects ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted January 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 25, 2008 I decided to wait until sunday to work on my deck some more. today I want to start a story. I wish to share the Story of Season 8 of my manga "Immortal Chronicals" subtitle "Enter the Shakari" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Zoner Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 You got pretty good Talent at making these. 9.5 /10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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