Azagal

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[img]http://img838.imageshack.us/img838/8821/257262.jpg[/img]
Lore: Increase the ATK of this card by 100 for each 100 lifepoints missing max amount of ATK Bonus is 1500.
Choose one of the following effects.
*Decrease The ATK of this card by 500 to gain 500 Life points.
*Pay 200 Life Points to Decrease the ATK of 1 monster that belongs to your opponent by 500.

[Tee-Jaie]

The card pic is cool, but the level makes it a little OP'd. Probably better LV8 than 9. But overall, cool card. 8-10

[Defel]

thx for good comment this is actually an old card i found. Never posted it dunno why

[Ieyasu Tokugawa]

Your OCG is really bad, but I can understand it and I think the idea is great! Here's a bit of a fix.

Increase the ATK of this card equal to 8000 - your Life Points(Max 1500). Once per turn, you can activate 1 of the following effects
*Decrease The ATK of this card by 500 to gain 500 Life points.
*Pay 200 Life Points to Decrease the ATK of 1 monster your opponent controls by 500.

I'd say change the cost of the first effect, since you'd be losing 1000 attack if your Life Points aren't less than 6500.

I don't find the level to ba a problem., but it might be good to add some sort of summoning condition for the card.

[Defel]

probably should check out my other topic Zash, The Shadow Demon

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