new use for Relinquished

[Master of The Dark]

[img]http://img607.imageshack.us/img607/8854/198311.jpg[/img]
[spoiler= Lore] "1 Tuner type monster" + "Relinquished" + "1 or more level 3 or lower non tuner monsters"
Select 1 monster in your opponent's graveyard and equip it to this card (This effect can only be used once per turn and you can only equip 1 monster at a time to this card, To equip a monster to this card you have to pay life points equal to half the ATK of the selected monster). The original ATK and DEF of this card are equal to the ATK and DEF of the elected monster x1.5. If this card would by destroyed, the equipped monster is destroyed instead, and any damage you received is halved and inflicted the same damage to your opponent's Life Points.[/spoiler]
Hope everyone like it and it give reason to put Relinquished back in your spellcaster decks.

[moppmoppmopp]

Acctually, this card haz ocg errors. Op'd, too. If you and your opponent has 10 monsters each, that will be 8000 ATK points on a 5 star monster...? And can only be destroyed by a Spellcaster, and no costs? And I don't want to rate that pic. It dosent fit so well. 3/10

[TheFantasy]

Wow.. The pic is.. ehm.. DAMN BAD :l This card has a few ocq errors, too.

2/10

[eldest]

I think that the idea of a Synchro Monster that needs Relinquished to be Summoned is great, but you need to work on this card a lot. The image is good but it's very blurry. I think that you should increase the Level of that monster ( to a Level 8 or 9) and set it's ATK and DEF to 0 just like all other Relinquished based cards. The effect is the part that needs a lot of work. Try something that implies the Equipping of a Monster Card of your opponent (maybe from his Graveyard or his Extra Deck). You can also make that it gain also the effect of the equipped monster not only thei ATK and DEF. The Mirror Damage effect must also be used. To make it more balanced you can put some condidions fo the summoning for example that you must use only Level 3 or lower monster. (Tuner+Relinquished+1 or more Level 3 or lower non-Tuner Monsters) or a drawback like a cost to activate the equipping effect (for example pay Life Points or Discard card from Hand or Deck). Last but not Least please think a better name, that one i not really original nor fitting

4/10
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[Master of The Dark]

fixed how is it now?

[Hila Ⅰ]

It just seems the same as Relinquished's effect maybe even a little less beneficial, because with relinquished if ur opponent only has 1 high level monster on the field u can clear their field while with this card u can't and relinquished is probably easier to summon than this as well so on the basis of my review I wud stick with relinquished 4/10

[Master of The Dark]

redited the ocg so how is it now?

[Hila Ⅰ]

Ur just making it worse, it's already worse than relinquished and then u give it the TER effect which will get banned immedeatley 2/10

[Master of The Dark]

ok well in stead of just saying what im doing is wrong why don't you give me an idea of what you would do to fix it.

[Ieyasu Tokugawa]

Because then we'd be doing you job

An idea would be to take relinquished's base effect, and then make it better and stronger. One way would be to add "If this monster would be destroyed, destroy the equipped monster instead", making it better because now it has protection from card effects.

Then you can also add on your own effects.

[Master of The Dark]

well what i meant was what you just did you gave me an idea to work off from I can use it and make it better. thank you will work on this card a lot till its just right.

effect changed who is this?

[Master of The Dark]

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