BloodHound's DBZ/GT Set.

[BloodHound]

[center][font="arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif"][b] [/b] [center][color="#000000"][b][size="2"][color="#FF0000"][b][size="2"][size="2"]Blood[/size][/size][/b][/color][color="#000080"][b][size="2"][size="2"]Hound's[/size][/size][/b][/color][b][size="2"][size="2"] Dragon Ball Z/GT Set[/size][/size][/b][/size][/b][/color][/center][b] [/b] [center][color="#000000"][b][size="2"][b][size="2"][size="2"]Cards: [/size][/size][/b][size="2"][size="2"][13] / [???][/size][/size][/size][/b][/color][/center][center]
[b] [/b][left][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]Hey there YCMForum, I've been putting a lot of thought into making a DBZ/GT Set lately, and i finally got around to doing it.[/size][/size][/size][/left] [left][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]Currently i have only completed Goku, but if you enjoy my cards i am going to make Every single DBZ/GT Character.[/size][/size][/size][/left][left][size="2"] [/size][/left][left] [/left] [left] [/left] [left] [/left] [left][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]Please Comment on how i can improve these cards, as i don't have a very good understanding of the OCG.[/size][/size][/size][/left] [left][size="2"][size="2"][size="2"]And i'll be updating the thread in the future so stay tuned for more cards.[/size][/size][/size][/left][left][size="2"] [/size][/left][left] [/left][b] [/b] [left][color="#000000"][b] [/b][/color][/left][b] [/b] [left][color="#000000"][b] [/b][/color][/left][b] [/b] [left][color="#000000"][b] [/b][/color][/left][b] [/b] [left][color="#000000"][b][size="2"][size="3"][size="2"][size="2"][spoiler='Early Series / Saiyan Saga'][img]http://unrealhosting.net/YGO/Goku/SonGokuEarly.jpg[/img][/spoiler]
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[/size][/size][/b][/color][/left] [left][color="#000000"][b] [/b][/color][/left][b] [/b] [left][color="#000000"][b][size="2"][size="3"][size="2"][size="2"][b]THE IMAGES ARE RIPPED FROM THE ACTUAL ANIME(S) - I DID NOT DRAW THEM NOR DO I TAKE CREDIT FOR THEM.[/b][/size][/size][/size][/size][/b][/color][/left][b] [/b] [left][color="#000000"][size="2"][font="arial"]Dragon Ball, Dragon Ball Z, and Dragon Ball GT are copyright and owned by Toei Animation, Fuji TV, Madman Entertainment, FUNimation Entertainment and Akira Toriyama.[/font][/size][/color][/left] [left][color="#000000"][size="2"][font="arial"]Support the Official Release(s).[/font][/size][/color][/left][/center][/font][/center]

[Bassa]

First thing:

The OCG, from what I can see is very good. (Athough I am no expert)
And the pictures are a good quality

The thing I would think of improving for future cards is the length of the effect. Some cards with longer effects make them look better. But that is up to you.

All in all though, very good cards 8.5/10.

[BloodHound]

[quote name='~Ɓȧșșȃ~' timestamp='1289729488' post='4783506']
First thing:

The OCG, from what I can see is very good. (Athough I am no expert)
And the pictures are a good quality

The thing I would think of improving for future cards is the length of the effect. Some cards with longer effects make them look better. But that is up to you.

All in all though, very good cards 8.5/10.
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Thanks Bassa, I intend to make effects longer (Maybe produce a 2nd Edition of these cards? Idk.) But the thing is i just can't think of good, balanced effects out of the top of my head :/

[Bassa]

A good way to make an Effect longer is to occasionally put something like...

"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by..."

Or...

"If this card is succesfully Normal Summoned or Special Summoned then..."

You ake up the rest. That is what I do on some of my cards.

EDIT: Oh Shizz. Just looked at you later carsd and they do have this...Fail. Sorry.

[BloodHound]

[quote name='~Ɓȧșșȃ~' timestamp='1289730406' post='4783527']
A good way to make an Effect longer is to occasionally put something like...

"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by..."

Or...

"If this card is succesfully Normal Summoned or Special Summoned then..."

You ake up the rest. That is what I do on some of my cards.

EDIT: Oh Shizz. Just looked at you later carsd and they do have this...Fail. Sorry.
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Thanks for your suggestion anyway, even though it was a mini-fail. I do appreciate someone giving comments
I gave you an Internet

[Bassa]

Lol. Thanks mate.