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Knight of Fire [UPDATED]

TheFantasy

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TheFantasy

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Pls comment and rate :]
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[b]Lore:[/b] When this card attacks, it is changed to Defense Position at the end of the Battle Phase. This position cannot be changed until the end of your next turn. If your opponent destroys this card in Defense Position your opponent loses 200 Life Points each turn.
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Jaedumuth

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"When this card attacks"...

I'm not sure what the official OCG would be like, and the rest of the card's text would come close, but somehow it doesn't sound right just yet. Anyway, it seems like a balanced card especially because of the high level in comparison with the low ATK, but on the other hand, the DEF is high enough to ward off most attacks and get you out of harms way for a little while.

Not directly useful to most people, but as with most cards, there is potential for this card to make a nice little addition to a deck.

However, I have to reduce the grade a little because the image reminds me of Darth Maul from Star Wars, with the dark cape and everything. I just don't like cards which are in some way a tribute to an already existing phenomenon, even if they're not meant to be. I know I'm harsh, but bear with me.

My grade: 8/10

Nice work!
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.Starrk

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Please post the lore under the card.

OCG: [b]This card's Battle Position is changed to defense mode after it attacks.[/b] [b]This cards Battle position cannot be changed until your next turn.[/b]

This is the weakest effect.

This card should be a Level 5 monster.


4/10


Sorry if I'm harsh. :/


However, this is one of the better first cards.
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Skirts Newbie

Skirts

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[quote name='TheFantasy' timestamp='1289862232' post='4787677']
I like knights and fire, so i picked that name xD
and it fix with the pic^^
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That's fine. ^_^ I was just giving some advice. People tend to like new and creative names. That's all .. Just some future advice ? :P

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I think this card is incredibly underpowered, having a high level for it's stats. It does make a good defense after attacking, but maybe raise it's ATK and lower it's level? Tributing two monsters for a 2000 ATK monster just doesn't seem worth it to me, unless the effect was totally incredible.
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[quote name='TheFantasy' timestamp='1289866422' post='4787901']
Mh.. i'll update soon.
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I would make it level 7, change it's attack too 2400, and defence to 1900. Here's why. Give the effect something like (might wanna check OCG, I am not so good at it.),

[b]Lore:[/b] [i]"When this card attacks, it is changed to Defense Position at the end of the Battle Phase. This position cannot be changed until the end of your next turn.[b]If your opponent destroys this card in Defense Position your opponent loses 600 Life Points.[/b]"

[/i]The idea from that effect is that since it is a "fire knight" it obviously has fire abilities. I know that in a lot of games or fantasy things, fire causes a burn effect. In this case .. When and if your opponent destroys it while it's in defense position (being forced into defense after it attacks and having low defense) your opponent will take 600 LP worth of damage as "burn". Take that and run with it and see if you can build off of it to make it better. I don't know. Just an idea. xD
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Skirts

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[quote name='TheFantasy' timestamp='1289872752' post='4788309']
thx for your help :]
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No problem. If you would like, you can add me and you can ask for help whenever. I used to make a lot of cards, and they were pretty decent too. So let me know. If you would like or need anything I can help. ^_^

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