Another Card By a Noob Plz rate :)

[DannyGirl]

[center][center][img]http://img713.imageshack.us/img713/9429/304003.jpg[/img][/center][/center]

[center][size="5"]This monster cannot be Normal Summoned or set. This monster cannot be Special summoned except by removing from play monster(s) from your Graveyard who's total level equals 8. Once Per turn you must Activate 1 of the following Effects:
*This monster cannot declare an attack during the turn you use this effect. Send 2 Face down Spell or Trap cards that you control to the graveyard and take control of 1 monster that your opponent controls.

*Until your next Standby Phase When a monster is Normal Summoned, remove from play that monster. During the next Standby Phase of the controller of the Summoned monster, Special Summon that monster in face-up Attack Position on its owner's side of the field.[/size][/center]

[.Starrk]

OCG:This monster cannot be [b]N[/b]ormal [b]S[/b]ummoned or set. This monster [b]cannot[/b] be Special summoned except by removing from play monster(s) from your Graveyard who's [b]total[/b] level equals 8. Once Per turn you must Activate 1 of the following Effects:
*This monster cannot declare an attack during the turn you use this effect. Send 2 Face down Spell or Trap card[b]s[/b] that you control to the graveyard [b]and[/b] take control of 1 monster that your opponent controls.

*Until your next Standby Phase When a monster is Normal Summoned, remove from play that monster. During the next Standby Phase of the controller [b]of the Summoned[/b] monster, Special Summon that monster in face-up Attack Position on its owner's side of the field.


Effect is pretty good.


Minor OCG errors. Fixed them.

I really did like the pic.

For a n00b you are pretty good

7.9/10

[DannyGirl]

thxs ill be sure to update sonn

[Just Incredible]

The name is a bit iffy for me, its a little original but maes it hard for the card to be taken seriously. The effect is good, maybe jsut change the name and fix that OCG Starrk mentioned.

8/10. Good n00b card.

[DannyGirl]

ok upDATED BTW THE NAME IS WEIRD i was embodying an actual person personality in this card and their name is larry. srry

[DannyGirl]

bump from 3rd page 12 hour rule

[DannyGirl]

12 hour bump 2nd page