Cameron-The Oblivious Destroyer

[DannyGirl]

[img]http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/9429/304003.jpg[/img]

This monster can be normal summoned without tribute, When this card is normal summoned in this way its original Atk becomes 2000 and During each of your Standby Phases you take 1000 Damage to your Life Points..During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. When this Card is sent to the graveyard by a card effect you can add 1 Earth monster form your deck to your hand with 2500 atk or less

[snowyash]

Let's have a quick overview on the pro's and cons concerning the balance of the card.

- Can normal summon as a 2000 ATK Beatstick or quick 2500 DEF Stall. OP'd.
- Easy summon + piercing. This card can do a lot of damage early.

+ 1000 damage during standby phase. BUT:

-It's during your Standby Phase. Potentially, you won't take any damage.

It's OP'd.

While there isn't anything wrong with making it a basic Normal Summon, the stats would have to be within reason.

5/10 so far. OCG isn't great, card is OP'd, name looks... awkward and pic leaves a lot to be desired.

[DannyGirl]

fixed pic and effect

[eldest]

Opd. Nice Pic. Try to fix the Ocg.
Try this version to make it more balenced
ATK 3300 DEF 2800 Level 9
You can Normal Summon this card with 1 Release. If this card is Normal Summoned this way, it's original ATK and DEF are reduced by 1000 Points and it's effect is negated. During a battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. When this Card is sent to the Graveyard by a card effect you can add 1 EARTH monster Attribute form your Deck to your Hand with 2500 ATK Points or less.


7.1/10


Keep Going

[DannyGirl]

yeah ok ill look into it

[.Starrk]

OCG: This monster can be [b]N[/b]ormal [b]S[/b]ummoned without tribute. When this card is [b]S[/b]ormal [b]S[/b]ummoned [b]by this card's effect,[/b] its original [b]ATK[/b] becomes 2000. [s]and[/s] During each of your Standby Phases[b],[/b] [b]inflict[/b] 1000 Damage to your Life Points. During battle between this [s]attacking[/s] card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict [b]difference damage to your opponent.[/b] When this Card is sent to the [b]G[/b]raveyard by a card effect[b],[/b] you can add 1 [b]EARTH[/b]monster from your deck to your hand [b]with an ATK less than 2500.[/b]


This card's effect doesnt flow.

It doesn't fit with the card.

OCG you NEED to work on.

Pic is ok.

6/10