My First Card

[Flupp]

Hi this is my first card I think it could be a bit overpowered and I'm not sure about the name. Rate and please be honest!


[img]http://img687.imageshack.us/img687/5118/315499.jpg[/img]

Effect:If this card is Tribute Summoned by Tributing a Warrior or Dragon-type monster, you can add up to two Warrior or Dragon-type monsters from your Deck to your hand. If this card is attacked by an opponent's monster, you can discard 1 Warrior or Dragon-type monster from your hand to the Graveyard to increase this card's ATK by that monsters level x100.


Heres the second.
[img]http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/5118/315499.jpg[/img]
Effect:1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Machine-type monsters
If this card attacks a face-down Defence Position monster, destroy that card with this card's effect without applying damage calculation. If this card destroys a Defence Position monster, inflict 700 points of damage to your opponent.

[Mr. L]

Quick OCG fix:

[spoiler=[color=green]Brave, the Dragon of War[/color]]If this card is Tribute Summoned by Tributing a Warrior or Dragon-type monster, you can add up to two Warrior or Dragon-type monsters from your Deck to your hand. If this card is attacked by an opponent's monster, you can discard 1 Warrior or Dragon-type monster from your hand to the Graveyard to increase this card's ATK by that monsters level x100.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=[color=red]Extreme Machine Lord Gunner[/color]]
1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Machine-type monsters
If this card attacks a face-down Defence Position monster, destroy that card with this card's effect without applying damage calculation. If this card destroys a Defence Position monster, inflict 700 points of damage to your opponent.[/spoiler]

Hmmm...lemme see. I like both images, to start (always the first thing that strikes me on a card). The name on the first is a little uncreative, try to make your own or get names that relate better to the image. The dragon looks more like something of a stormy-god themed dragon, as I would imagine a 'dragon of war' would have a more war-ish image. I don't see it getting a lot of use, as I haven't heard of many Warrior/Dragon decks (but I could just be out of date). The Gunner has a suitable name though, it fits well with the image and gives a 'trump card' sense. I was expecting a DSF wannabe at first, but when I realised it was a destroyer I thought it a little overpowered.

[Flupp]

Thanks for actually replying! I fixed the OCG.

[Smashsquatch]

In all honesty these are pretty good cards.
All I'd have to say is I think your first card is alittle over-powered.