Steelux Posted November 16, 2010 Report Share Posted November 16, 2010 Hi, I'm new here and [s]I suck at making cards, but I am a masochist so[/s] I will show here some of my cards, please be honest with your rating: [spoiler=Mortifera Reaper] [spoiler=Before] [img]http://img687.imageshack.us/img687/6434/314970.jpg[/img] [/spoiler] [spoiler=After] [img]http://img687.imageshack.us/img687/8623/314970c.jpg[/img] [/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=Shadow Abyss Dragon] [spoiler=Before] [img]http://img718.imageshack.us/img718/7380/314970x.jpg[/img] [/spoiler] [spoiler=After] [img]http://img837.imageshack.us/img837/6434/314970.jpg[/img] [/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=Glyhon the Subtilis] [spoiler=Before] [img]http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/1013/glyhonthesubtilis.png[/img] [/spoiler] [spoiler=After] [img]http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/1013/glyhonthesubtilis.png[/img] [/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=Protection] [spoiler=Before] [img]http://img801.imageshack.us/img801/6434/314970.jpg[/img] [/spoiler] [spoiler=After] [img]http://img51.imageshack.us/img51/6434/314970.jpg[/img] [/spoiler][/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snowyash Posted November 17, 2010 Report Share Posted November 17, 2010 OK, I will look over your cards. [b]Montifera Reaper[/b] ATK is too high. Drop it to 2000-2400 and it's fine. The effect I like, but the OCG needs work. Here is what I recommend. Discard any number of cards from your Hand. Select 1 monster on your opponents side of the field and take take control of it for one turn x the number of cards discarded by this card's effect. It is returned to your opponent in the End Phase of the specified turn. [b]Shadow Abyss Dragon[/b] The most balanced of your cards. I recommend adding "other than this card" to both parts of the effect otherwise it's impervious to attacks and gives itself more ATK than a Level 6 should have. And ATK/DEF should be ATK and DEF. [b]Glyphon the Subtilis[/b] Far too strong. ATK should be 2500, maybe 2600 at most. If you're going to make a Normal Monster, a longer description would be nice. [b]Protection[/b] Could be useful in Decks that include Solidarity. Maybe continuous instead of equipt o increase its use. Needs an OCG fix: Designate a monster Type. Monsters Cards you control can not be destroyed by battle by a monster of a different Type than the chosen Type. (This is assuming you change the card to a Continuous Spell.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaime Duferier Posted November 17, 2010 Report Share Posted November 17, 2010 Glyhon's type doesn't exist. Change it to WARRIOR. Discard X amount of cards is bad OCG. Change it to discard any number of cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steelux Posted November 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2010 Thanks guys! I have followed your advices! Seems I had a lot of errors in my cards :/ Well, I'm learning... Oh, and a +rep to both of you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaime Duferier Posted December 2, 2010 Report Share Posted December 2, 2010 [quote name='Steelux' timestamp='1290016113' post='4791275'] Thanks guys! I have followed your advices! Seems I had a lot of errors in my cards :/ Well, I'm learning... Oh, and a +rep to both of you! [/quote] We are all happy to help.[s]... (well, most of us are)[/s] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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