~Twinshadow~Wick~ New Signature Card: The Wicked Machinima Duo

[Twinshadow~Wick]

Hello!!!
Since I created a new account, I should create a new signature card, and new signature and stuff...
AND HERE THEY ARE!!
[IMG]http://img44.imageshack.us/img44/1403/259453.jpg[/img]
[b][u]LORE:[/u][/b]
[i]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by tributing 3 monsters on your side of the field. When this card is Summoned, you may destroy up to 2 Spell or Trap card anywhere on the field. When a Spell or Trap card is destroyed on the field, your opponent takes 250 damage to it's Life Points. Once per turn you can discard 1 card from your hand to destroy 2 Spell or Trap cards on the field. This card cannot attack the turn you activated this effect. When this card is destroyed, your opponent must select 1 cards from his/her Deck and send it to the Graveyard, afterwards, him/her shuffle his/her Deck. These cards effects cannot be activated while in the Graveyard. You may remove this card from play from your Graveyard to add 1 Spell or Trap cards from your Deck or Graveyard an add them to your hand. Afterwards shuffle your Deck.[/i]
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[b][u]And please check out my signature, and comment and rate this card, please!!![/u][/b]

[forteller]

Wow omfg dude check this out.

Ok you have to use 3 monsters to get this out (nope problem in machine deck that is running machina cards they move fast)
When you summon it your opponent is going to lose two spell or traps and take 1000 damage that a bit step for one monster dont you think.
Then you can get rid of 1 card from your hand to get rid of two more cards and deal another 1000 (op'ed)
It can eat at your opponents deck when its sent to the graveyard(not op'ed but when combined with the other stuff it can do it is)
then you can remove it from play to add 2 spell or traps to your hand(mega op'ed)
then card is really unfair once you summon this you can easily destroy four spell or trap cards deal 2000 damage and then still attack????
but seriously just tone it down some

I say take out the life ponit damage and take out the discard part then keep everything esle and then you can give it more attack(cuz it is an eight star monster

Gotta give it a low rate cuz it dosent belong in RC inbox for rerate once card is fixed.
6/10

[Twinshadow~Wick]

[quote name='forteller' timestamp='1290129071' post='4794488']
Wow omfg dude check this out.

Ok you have to use 3 monsters to get this out (nope problem in machine deck that is running machina cards they move fast)
When you summon it your opponent is going to lose two spell or traps and take 1000 damage that a bit step for one monster dont you think.
Then you can get rid of 1 card from your hand to get rid of two more cards and deal another 1000 (op'ed)
It can eat at your opponents deck when its sent to the graveyard(not op'ed but when combined with the other stuff it can do it is)
then you can remove it from play to add 2 spell or traps to your hand(mega op'ed)
then card is really unfair once you summon this you can easily destroy four spell or trap cards deal 2000 damage and then still attack????
but seriously just tone it down some

I say take out the life ponit damage and take out the discard part then keep everything esle and then you can give it more attack(cuz it is an eight star monster

Gotta give it a low rate cuz it dosent belong in RC inbox for rerate once card is fixed.
6/10
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Thank you, yeah I tought it was kinda O'ped, but I guess lowering its ATK and DEF wasn't enough.
I changed it, lowered the damage your opponent gets and negate the card attack if the effect was done. Also changed for only 1 Spell or Trap card you may add to your hand when removed from play. Althou i upped his ATK. Whaddya think now?


Edit: I thunk better and now your opponent may only remove one card.
Edit2: Oh and if you think it's better, I can add you may have only one copy of this card in your Deck.

[UrWorstNightmare009]

Omg it's pretty =DDD
4/4 for appearance
1/1 for epic name =D
5/5 for lore =3
10/10 =O!

[NeXodus]

The Wicked "Machinima" Duo?

It's a random name... isn't it?
Machinima can't fit in the name because the term machinima means Machine Cinema which is using the basis of a video game and creating a film out of it.

But enough of the lessons, on to teh card.

your side of the field = your field
may = can

couple grammar mistakes.
misuses of the letter "s"
kind of op'ed, not much tho.
"long effect does not make a good effect, a good effect means you put effort into your concept."
the effect is long, sure, and it looks complicated from a distance, but the long-ness of the effect does not help
the ocg errors and such. the picture is nice, but the name and/or image do not fit.
a little repitition of "shuffle thy deck".

the only good thing is the image, but I know it's not YOUR image, does not matter tho.
5/10