[Soul Corruption] by Fierté

[Fierté]

I know it needs OCG but here it is.

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[snowyash]

It shouldn't really have the Equip Icon, just make sure it's clear in the effect. As for the card, it is almost like a long-lasting Honest that is suitably drawn back. I'm not keen on OCG fixes, it's not my area of expertise. The picture looks like it could be better, but on the whole, I like the card. 7/10

[Makο]

OCG Fix: Only activate this card when your opponent attack a monster you control. Equip this card to the targeted monster, and increase that cards ATK by the attacking monsters. Destroy the attacking monster. At the next End Phase, destroy the Equipped monster.


This was a little hard for me to word.



I can see what you are trying to do here. Sort of a, "Negate the attack, destroy the attacker, but also destroy the defender."

I don't see the point of gaining the opposing monsters ATK. You could just do this.

"Only activate this card in response to an attack from your opponent. Negate the attack, and destroy the attacking monster. At the next End Phase, destroy the targeted monster."

Just saying.

It was a decent effort.

5.5/10