My first card. Help.

[Mr. L]

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[spoiler=Card Lore]Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can select 1 Level 4 or lower Monster in your opponent's Graveyard and Special Summon it to your side of the field. The Special Summoned monster cannot attack. If you still control the Monster during your End Phase, activate the appropriate effect:
--Level 1: Destroy this card, and switch control of the Monster to your opponent.
--Level 2: Destroy this card, and take 1000 damage.
--Level 3: Remove this card from play, and switch control of the Monster to your opponent.
--Level 4: Remove this card from play, and switch control of the Monster to your opponent. Your opponent can then Special Summon 1 Tuner Monster from their Graveyard.
If this card is removed from play, you can skip your Draw Phase to Special Summon it to your side of the field.[/spoiler]

Please let me know what you think.

[tommystar]

pretty good but if the effect of that this monster returns it to te side of the field when its removed from play you better change the effect like this:


--Level 1: remove this card from play, and switch control of the Monster to your opponent.
--Level 2: remove this card from play, and take 1000 damage.
--Level 3: destoy this card, and switch control of the Monster to your opponent.
--Level 4: destoy this card, and switch control of the Monster to your opponent. Your opponent can then Special Summon 1

or you can change the effect like this:

If this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the graveyard, you can skip your Draw Phase to Special Summon it to your side of the field.

I hope I helped you


verry good for first card: 7,6/10

[Fierté]

this is a little drawn back
wouldnt play it if it existed
but still fairly good.

[Mr. L]

Comments are much appreciated guys, if more people suggest an effect change I'll edit.

[omega prinny]

its looking pretty good, keep it up. you should also make a synchro monster based on that card, like scholarly specter (joke about the name).