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Lore:

This card deals piercing damage. Each time this card deals Piercing Damage, add 1 "Tank Counter" on this card. If this card is used as Synchro Material for a Machine-Type Synchro Summon, increase the ATK of the Summoned monster x200 for each "Tank Counter" on this card.
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[center]Not bad, but your OCG needs work.
(I'm not the best at OCG, but I'll have a go at fixing it)

[i]Whenever this cards attacks a Defence position monster whose Def is lower than the Atk of this card, inflict the difference as battle damge to your opponent. Whenever this card deals damage this way, add one ''Tank' Counter to this card. If this card is used for the Synchro summon of a machine type Synchro monster increase that monsters Atk by 200 for each 'Tank' Counter on this card[/i]

Like I said, I'm not to good at OCG but this looks a little better.
Someone else will correct me, I am sure.

7/10[/center]
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My opinion on the OCG:
During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. Whenever this card deals Battle Damage to your opponent, place 1 Tank Counter on this card. If this card is used for the Synchro Summon of a Machine-type Synchro monster, increase the ATK of that monster by the number of Tank Counters on this card X200.

'Piercing' was never part of any card's OCG.

I like the idea, but I think you won't get much piercing with a 1400 ATK monster. Strongly reminds me of Drill Synchron. And try not to use images with white BGs, it looks less realistic.
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