Guest The Ringmaster Posted November 20, 2010 Report Share Posted November 20, 2010 Alright, so I decided to make my own meta archetype! Weird, right? So, I'm going to post 2 monsters, 2 Synchs, 4 Spells, and 4 Traps for your enjoyment. =) Please tell me what you think! :( And sorry, no lores for now. Also, I'd like some rates, please. Pictures --/10Effects --/10Usefulness --/10Originality --/10 [spoiler= Monsters] [spoiler= Abandoned Toy - Browny the Bear] LORE: When this monster is Summoned, Special Summon one level 4 or lower "Abandoned Toy" monster from your hand, except "Abandoned Toy - Browny the Bear." When this monster is sent to the Graveyard as Synchro Material, Special Summon it to the field. [spoiler= Abandoned Toy - Barky the Dog] LORE: Attacking "Abandoned Toy" monsters may not be destroyed by battle as long as this monster is face-up on the field. As long as this card is face-up on the field, your opponent must pay 500 Life Points to activate a Trap card for every face-up "Abandoned Toy" monster you control. [spoiler= Abandoned Toy - Hoppy the Bunny] LORE:While this monster is in your Graveyard, when a face-up "Abandoned Toy" monster you control battles, during the Damage Step, you may remove this monster from play to have that face-up "Abandoned Toy" monster gain 500 ATK. [spoiler= Abandoned Toy - Pokey the Panda] LORE: When a face-up "Abandoned Toy" monster you control is destroyed by battle, you may Special Summon this card from your hand. If your opponent battles a face-up "Abandoned Toy" monster you control, the opposing monster loses 300 ATK and DEF during the damage step only. [spoiler= Abandoned Toy - Hammy Ham Brigade] LORE: When 3 or more "Abandoned Toy" monsters are sent to the Graveyard by an opponent's card, Special Summon this card from your hand. You may Tribute this card to Special Summon 2 level 4 or lower "Abandoned Toy" monsters from your Graveyard. [spoiler= Abandoned Toy - Fluffy the Lamb] LORE: When this monster is Normal Summoned, you may pay 500 Life Points to add one level 4 or lower "Abandoned Toy" monster from your Graveyard to your hand. When this card is Special Summoned, you may Special Summon one level 4 or lower "Abandoned Toy" monster from your Graveyard, except "Abandoned Toy - Fluffy the Lamb." [spoiler= Abandoned Toy - Boney the Puppy] LORE: This monster may not be destroyed by battle. When this monster is used as Synchro Material for a "Abandoned Toy" Synchro Monster, you may remove from play this card in your Graveyard to Special Summon the non-Tuner monsters used for the Syncro Summon. [spoiler= Abandoned Toy - Purry the Cat] LORE: Face-up "Abandoned Toy" monsters gain 100 ATK for every face-up "Abandoned Toy" monster on the field. Once per turn, you may discard one card from your hand to have one monster on the field gain 500 ATK. If the card discarded for this effect is an "Abandoned Toy" monster, you may return it to the deck and shuffle it. [spoiler= Abandoned Toy - Dolly the Doll] LORE: When this monster is Summoned, you may select one "Abandoned Toy" monster in your Graveyard and equip it to this card. If this card would be destroyed, you may instead destroy the monster equipped to this card. When this monster is destroyed while still equipped with a monster, Special Summon the monster in face-up attack position. [spoiler= Abandoned Toy - Zippy the Hamster] LORE: If you control at least 1 face-up "Abandoned Toy" monster, you may Special Summon this card from your hand. While this card is in the Graveyard, if you control a face-up "Abandoned Toy" Tuner, you may Special Summon this card from the Graveyard. If this monster was Summoned with this effect, remove it from play when it is removed from the field. [spoiler= Synchros] [spoiler= Abandoned Toy - Scaley the Dragon] LORE: 1 "Abandoned Toy" Tuner + 2 or more non-Tuner monsters When this card is Synchro Summoned, you may select one Spell card and one Trap card in your Graveyard, and add both to your hand. Face-up "Abandoned Toy" monsters except "Abandoned Toy" Synchro monsters have their original ATK become 2,000. [spoiler= Abandoned Toy - Uny the Unicorn] LORE: 1 "Abandoned Toy" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters When the Battle Phase starts, you may Special Summon one "Abandoned Toy" monster from your Graveyard. For the rest of the Battle Phase, if this card would be targeted by the effect of a Trap card, the Special Summoned monster is targeted instead. Send the Special Summoned monster to the Graveyard at the end of the Battle Phase. [spoiler= Abandoned Toy - Pengy the Penguin] LORE: 1 "Abandoned Toy" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters Whenever an "Abandoned Toy" monster is Normal Summoned, you may remove this card from play to Special Summon one "Abandoned Toy" monster in your Graveyard. During the End Phase, destroy the monster and place this card back in its original position. [spoiler= Abandoned Toy - Darky the Demon] LORE: 1 "Abandoned Toy" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters When a face-up "Abandoned Toy" monster(s) is sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon it. When this monster is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, place it back in the Extra Deck. [spoiler= Abandoned Toy - Stripey the Tiger] LORE: 1 "Abandoned Toy" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters When this card is targeted by an opponent's card effect, you may Tribute this monster to Special Summon the monsters used for this monster's Synchro Summon. Monsters Summoned in this way have their level increased by 1, and may not be used for a Synchro Summon this turn. [spoiler= Abandoned Toy - Kingy the Lion] LORE: 1 "Abandoned Toy" Tuner + 3 or more non-Tuner monsters Spell and Trap cards are shuffled back into the deck after activation instead of going to the Graveyard. When this monster is removed from the field by a card effect, Special Summon up to 3 "Abandoned Toy" monsters in your Graveyard. [spoiler= Abandoned Toy - Pekky the Bird] LORE: 1 "Abandoned Toy" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters When this monster is removed from the field, put one "Feather Counter" on all face-up "Abandoned Toy" monsters. When an "Abandoned Toy" monster would be destroyed by battle, remove one "Feather Counter" instead. [spoiler= Spells] [spoiler= Abandoned Toy Graveyard] LORE: When a monster your opponent controls battles a face-up "Abandoned Toy" monster, the opposing monster loses 300 ATK and DEF during the damage step only. When a face-up "Abandoned Toy" monster is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you may pay 500 Life Points to select one "Abandoned Toy" monster from your deck and send it to the Graveyard. [spoiler= Abandoned Toy Warehouse] LORE: Face-up "Abandoned Toy" monsters you control gain 300 ATK and DEF during the damage step only. When a face-up "Abandoned Toy" monster you control is destroyed by a card effect, you may Special Summon one level 4 or lower "Abandoned Toy" monster from your deck. [spoiler= Massacre of the Helpless] LORE: When you activate this card, destroy all face-up "Abandoned Toy" monsters on the field. Then, Special Summon any number of level 4 or lower "Abandoned Toy" monsters from your hand or deck equal to the number of "Abandoned Toy" monsters destroyed. [spoiler= For Sale] LORE: Whenever a face-up "Abandoned Toy" monster you control is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you may pay 500 Life Points to add one level 4 or lower "Abandoned Toy" monster from your deck to your hand. [spoiler= Tea Party] LORE: When this card is played, both players may select one monster from their Graveyards and Special Summon them to the field in face-up attack position. If at least one "Abandoned Toy" monster was Summoned, then destroy one face-up monster your opponent controls. [spoiler= Beginnings of the Abandoned Toys] LORE: You may select up to 3 "Abandoned Toy" monsters in your Graveyard and shuffle them into your deck. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, roll a die. On a 1 or 4, shuffle this card back into your deck. On a 2 or 5, add one level 4 or lower "Abandoned Toy" monster from your deck to your hand. On a 3 or 6, Special Summon 2 level 4 or lower "Abandoned Toy" monsters in your Graveyard. [spoiler= Traps] [spoiler= Tears for the Abandoned] LORE: Once per turn, when a face-up "Abandoned Toy" monster is destroyed by battle, Special Summon one level 4 or lower "Abandoned Toy" monster in your Graveyard. That monster's ATK and DEF are halved. [spoiler= Greatest Wish of the Abandoned] LORE: Increase the ATK of all face-up "Abandoned Toy" monsters by 1,000 until the End Phase. [spoiler= Happiness in Solitude] LORE: You may only activate this card when you control exactly one face-up "Abandoned Toy" monster. Special Summon one level 4 or lower "Abandoned Toy" monster from your deck. [spoiler= Fate of the Abandoned] LORE: Face-up "Abandoned Toy" monsters may not be destroyed by battle this turn, and receive no battle damage from battles. During the End Phase, destroy one face-up "Abandoned Toy" monster you control. If you a face-up "Abandoned Toy" monster isn't on the field, gain 1,000 Life Points. [spoiler= Guardian of the Abandoned] LORE: Tribute one face-up "Abandoned Toy" monster to negate the activation and effect of your opponent's Spell or Trap card. [spoiler= Rebellion of the Abandoned] LORE: Special Summon up to 3 level 2 or lower "Abandoned Toy" monsters from your Graveyard. This turn, when a face-up "Abandoned Toy" monster attacks, immediately destroy the opposing monster without applying damage calculation, if the opposing monster has higher ATK or DEF. XD Yes, I used a Winnie the Pooh picture. Sue me. EDIT: Alright, that's all of them. Enjoy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fierté Posted November 20, 2010 Report Share Posted November 20, 2010 Cool idea, pics. suing for winnie de pooh. jk. thats cool tooneeds some developementother than that this set is perfect and original10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mugendramon Posted November 20, 2010 Report Share Posted November 20, 2010 ...I seem to have noticed your Synchros need an "Abandoned Toy" Tuner, yet none of your monsters is a Tuner. Improve on that, and I'll rate all of the cards. ...though don't expect 100% honest criticizing, since you are a new member. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest The Ringmaster Posted November 20, 2010 Report Share Posted November 20, 2010 Cool idea, pics. suing for winnie de pooh. jk. thats cool tooneeds some developementother than that this set is perfect and original10/10 ...I seem to have noticed your Synchros need an "Abandoned Toy" Tuner, yet none of your monsters is a Tuner. Improve on that, and I'll rate all of the cards. ...though don't expect 100% honest criticizing, since you are a new member. Thank you both very much! ^^; And yeah, I only posted 16 cards of the series, but I have a full 40 card deck already made, with Tuners, Synchs, and everything. I just wanted to post some promo cards, and I also forgot how to do Spoilers, and I didn't want to crash anyone's computer with 20+ cards loading. XD But why shouldn't I expect honest criticism? o.o I really hope people are 100% honest with me. I want to improve on my card development, and I KNOW it's not perfect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mugendramon Posted November 20, 2010 Report Share Posted November 20, 2010 Heh... funny. One would normally reply to cards you made as "They are pathetic, absolutely terrible." If they had been made by a 5-Star Member. However, someone who has only posted ten times, they are quite good. This is what I mean by 'honesty'. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest The Ringmaster Posted November 20, 2010 Report Share Posted November 20, 2010 =) You just gotta know what comments to take, and what not to take. But thanks for the warning, Blind Monkey. I'll be sure to remember that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A1v1n1 Posted November 20, 2010 Report Share Posted November 20, 2010 are the pictures original? if they are, its awesome! I like it for sure!Picture 10/10effects 10/10usefulness 10/10originality 9/10 (winnie the pooh... jk 10/10)im a bad drawer XD teach meeeee Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mugendramon Posted November 20, 2010 Report Share Posted November 20, 2010 He didn't draw them. He got the pics from google, probably. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest The Ringmaster Posted November 20, 2010 Report Share Posted November 20, 2010 He didn't draw them. He got the pics from google, probably. No probably about them. XD I DID get it off of Google Images. So please, don't rate on the pictures thinking I did them, I just found them and used them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted November 20, 2010 Report Share Posted November 20, 2010 Your Synchros require an Abandoned Toy Tuner. No Abandoned Toy Tuner exists. That's how little thought has been put into these. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest The Ringmaster Posted November 20, 2010 Report Share Posted November 20, 2010 Your Synchros require an Abandoned Toy Tuner. No Abandoned Toy Tuner exists. That's how little thought has been put into these. I already mentioned this. I only posted a few cards of the series. Actually, I do believe 4 Abandoned Toy Tuners do exist. ._. I have a full 40 card deck of them for Heaven's sake. I only posted these to show some of them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mugendramon Posted November 20, 2010 Report Share Posted November 20, 2010 To prevent more comments like this, I suggest you upload at least 1 Tuner from that series of your, will you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest The Ringmaster Posted November 21, 2010 Report Share Posted November 21, 2010 To prevent more comments like this, I suggest you upload at least 1 Tuner from that series of your, will you? >.> At the rate this is going, might as well just upload the whole deck! Give me quite a few minutes, I'll get on that.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest The Ringmaster Posted November 21, 2010 Report Share Posted November 21, 2010 Fixed! Enjoy the whole deck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
unbreakerable Posted April 29, 2011 Report Share Posted April 29, 2011 the only thing you should change is the pics on hoppy and fluffy cuz i know they are both from "fruits basket". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EndlessOcean Posted April 29, 2011 Report Share Posted April 29, 2011 Cngratulations on Necrobumping!-Reported. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max. Posted April 30, 2011 Report Share Posted April 30, 2011 Pictures 8/10 - I think a couple of the pics were blurry, but nonethelass they were fine for this set... Effects 9.5/10 - I liked the effects, not to long (I HATE it when effects where the text is so small you can't read it), and not to short. Usefulness 7/10 - A little weak, but the spells and traps make up for this, it would make a good deck. Originality 10/10 - Never seen a series quite like this. Overall 8.7/10 - Overall it's a pretty good set, I find that all the monsters are balanced, and the spells and traps help them make it through the longrun. Good Job, not many people get this good of a rank. (Please disregard this, I didn't read the dates Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Izanagi_no_Okami Posted April 30, 2011 Report Share Posted April 30, 2011 Your monsters have very interesting effects, I would like to have a duel against them xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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