bebe card

[georgian]

this is the newest card:
[IMG]http://i51.tinypic.com/iy1zfd.jpg[/IMG]

[Makο]

1) You made it a vanilla, while it has an effect.

2) WAY to OP'd. Next.

3) Pic is good.

4) Though Far to Op'd, at least the OCG is correct. To a degree.



2/10, cause I am feeling generous. Try to get card making lessons from someone, ok?

[Loranis]

1 1/2 /10

[Zextra]

Please don't post the same topic twice (though I would understand if it were a mistake). Mako and I have already commented on your last thread of this exact same card:
http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/229386-new-card/page__p__4795540__fromsearch__1#entry4795540

Therefore, I will reiterate what I posted on the last thread

First of all, the stats are wayyyyyyyyyyyyyy too strong for a Level 4 monster and the effect is ridiculously OP'ed (unless you make its ATK 100 or something...).
Also, just a note, since you're new:
People here at YCM don't like the DIVIN attribute. Therefore, unless you're making a BALANCED and FAIR card, avoid using DIVINE.
Creativity is the key... The perfect blend of balance, playability, and originality makes the best card.
The point of this forum is not to post ridiculous cards that are completely nonsense. Try to put effort into your card.
Also, about the name (and the effect for that matter), try making it more interesting. "Invincible Dragon" makes people not want to look at it, and your effect just further proves the point.
Anyways, I'm not trying to be mean, but work a little harder on your cards before actually posting here... Cards like these will make a bad reputation around here, and trust me, you don't want that.
Good luck on your card-making