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First Yugioh card...


Destroyer of Time

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[quote name='Destroyer of Time' timestamp='1290326794' post='4799959']
Would this card be terrible or good?

I worked very hard on this and wanted to know if it was too powerful or too weak...
Please reply.[attachment=30164:Yugioh Card One.bmp]
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Sorry about that...
here it is...
[img]http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/5492/318508.jpg[/img]

[quote name='Bluster Soldier' timestamp='1290327076' post='4799969']
Don't add attachments, simply click ont he finished card and copy the image code that appears underneath it
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Thank you for the help... I got it now.
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KK for the card correct OCG:

(Another tip post the effect under the card, allows for easier critiquing)

This card cannot be [b]S[/b]et. This card is unaffected by the effects of [b]S[/b]pell, [b]T[/b]rap or [b]M[/b]onster [b]C[/b]ards. When this card is destroyed [s]as a result of battle[/s] [b]by battle[/b], discard 2 cards from your hand to [b]reveal 1 level 4 or lower monster from your Deck[/b] and Set it on your field.

Think that's right anyway, Some tips:

Capitalization: any form of "summon" should be capitalized, "N"ormal "S"ummon, "S"pecial "S"ummon etc. Other words are: "Graveyard", "Deck", "Attack Position" and "Life Points" (there are more however)

Grammar:
- "Your side of the field", "Your opponent's side of the field" These are both replace by "Your control", "Your opponent controls"
- "Inflict # Damage to your opponent's Life Points" is replaced simply with " Inflict # damage to your opponent"
- "Destroyed as a result of battle" is replaced with "Destroyed by battle"
- Whenever you say a Type of monster show like this: "Warrior", "Spellcaster", "Beast-Warrior" Capitalized
- Whenever you say an attribute never say "A LIGHT Attribute monster", simply say, "A LIGHT monster"

Anyway that's all i can think of at the moment hope that helps a bit.
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