Floyd. Posted November 23, 2010 Report Share Posted November 23, 2010 [center]This screenplay is aimed to be a classic Boxing movie. It has a completely original plot line and is slow to start but hard to take your eyes off of, if you're bored and have nothing better to do give me some feedback on the first few pages, be my personal critique, heck, if you want; open up a YCM Newspaper and write a review on this film, I don't care I just want feedback. Ricky (Young) - Jaden Smith [b]Please click the attached file to view the Screenplay in the [u]correct[/u] format. [/b] [/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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