MegaDarkAngel Posted November 24, 2010 Report Share Posted November 24, 2010 Please tell me what you think of it! More chapters to come (if I get a lot of responses)! Plus, you can give me ideas for characters, conflicts, plots, anything! [spoiler="Chapter One: First Premonition"] As David's alarm clock rang, he got up quickly, turning it off. He swiftly ran into his bathroom, put on the school clothes hanging on the door, and ate breakfast. His family was still asleep. When the saw the bus pass his house, he rushed outside and waited for it to reach the dead-end and turn around to pick him up, as usual. When the bus finally came back, David rushed in and sat down in the middle, where he always sat. "Hey, David!" A girl said from two seats behind him. He stood up on the seat and turned around. "Hey, Cassie!" David said, sinking back into his seat before the bus driver, who was a serious b**** noticed. At a red light, David leaned his head against the window and let out a sight, looking at the trees. Suddenly, David gasped, losing his breath. His sight faded away. Suddenly, all he saw was the greenlight, fire, and dead children inside a school. And David was one of them. When David returned to himself, he looked at Cassie, a little worried. He hasn't had a premonition since he was about seven. He was thirteen now. Why would he suddenly have one? David stood up in his seat, wanting the bus driver to b**** at him, to distract her. If she didn't move the bus at the time she was supposed to, maybe everyone would live. "SIT DOWN!" She yelled. David stayed standing up. "DID YOU NOT HEAR WHAT I SAID? [b]SIT DOWN![/b]" She screamed even louder. "David, just sit down..." Cassie whispered, loud enough for him to hear. David quickly saw the light turn green. The bus driver said something, but david couldn't hear her. Suddenly, all he heard were screams of terror. "LOOK OUT!" A lot of kids screamed, seeing a log truck zooming towards the side of the bus. David got back up and ran to the front of the bus. "GO!" He screamed, not caring about being written up. The bus driver pushed on the gas pedal, zooming forward, hitting a tree. David flew forward, his head hitting the windshield and breaking it, slicing his neck a little.[/spoiler] [spoiler="Chapter Two: Running Away"] David woke up in a hospital a few days later. "Where the hell am I?" He asked, rubbing his head as he slowly sat up in the bed. "North Oaks Hospital." The nurse said, checking the monitors to see if something was wrong with him. "So I really did get in that wreck on the bus?" David asked, looking at the nurse. "Bus wreck? No... You were sleep walking and you took a knife from the kitchen, and sliced your neck. You almost bled to death. It's a good thing your sister took you to the hospital before you bled to death." She said, writing something on a piece of paper. "I tried to kill myself in my sleep?!" David asked, startled. "Yes." The nurse said, walking out of the room. A few moments later, Samantha, David's sister walked in. "How are you doing?" She asked, staring at the cut around his neck. "Good... but I had a premonition in my dream..." David said, looking away from her. Samantha quickly sat in the chair beside the bed. "What did you see?" She asked, her eyes full of fear. "I saw the school bus wreck into a tree... then a truck slammed into the side of it... and I was on it. I flew into the windshield and sliced my neck..." David said, looking at Samantha now. "Yeah... I actually found you in your bed, blood soaking your pillow and a deep cut on your throat. I figured you had a premonition." She said, looking out the door to see if the nurse was coming back yet. "We need to leave..." David said, looking at his clothes hung over a chair across the room. "Why?" Samantha asked, a little worried. "When they examine my neck, they'll know it wasn't a knife, and that you lied. So they'll think you did something to try and kill me, then bring me here to make them think it was a suicide attempt." David said, staring into Samantha's eyes. "Fine... We leave tonight, when they release you." Samantha said, walking over to his clothes and throwing them to him.[/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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