Andybaby1989 Posted November 24, 2010 Report Share Posted November 24, 2010 ok i found some awsome pics someone made on the net so i didnt draw these [u][b]Monsters[/b][/u] [img]http://i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv126/andybaby1989/WhiteChessPawn.jpg?t=1291015156[/img][img]http://i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv126/andybaby1989/BlackChessPawn.jpg?t=1291015156[/img] [img]http://i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv126/andybaby1989/WhiteChessRook.jpg?t=1291015178[/img][img]http://i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv126/andybaby1989/BlackChessRook.jpg?t=1291015156[/img] [img]http://i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv126/andybaby1989/WhiteChessBiship.jpg?t=1291015156[/img][img]http://i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv126/andybaby1989/BlackChessBiship.jpg?t=1291015156[/img] [img]http://i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv126/andybaby1989/WhiteChessKnight.jpg?t=1291015156[/img][img]http://i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv126/andybaby1989/BlackChessKnight.jpg?t=1291015156[/img] [u][b]Synchros[/b][/u] [img]http://i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv126/andybaby1989/WhiteChessQueen.jpg?t=1291015156[/img][img]http://i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv126/andybaby1989/BlackChessQueen.jpg?t=1291015156[/img] [img]http://i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv126/andybaby1989/WhiteChessKing.jpg?t=1291015156[/img][img]http://i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv126/andybaby1989/BlackChessKing.jpg?t=1291015156[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flarehunter76 Posted November 24, 2010 Report Share Posted November 24, 2010 Pretty awesome! One thing I would suggest is to change the White Pawn's ATK and DEF to 1000 each, instead of 1200. Also, maybe on Chess Board, specify who gets the life points, for instance: "Every time a 'White Chess' monster's effect activates, the opponent of the controller of that card loses 200 life points. Every time a 'Black Chess' monster's effect activates, the controller of that card gains 200 life points." Another thing I would do is perhaps make the Queen pieces have more ATK than the King pieces, but that's your decision and it's good as it is now too. Maybe also add some more trap cards, just to even it out a bit. Aside from that, I can't see pictures on the cards, I don't know if it's my computer doing that or if you haven't added any, but if you haven't then you should, They shouldn't be too hard to find. These are all just suggestions, it looks really great as it is. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andybaby1989 Posted November 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2010 Yea didnt notice my white pawn was 1200 and the effects like the chess borad and that looks obvious what it does for traps it was hard for me to think of stuff that goes with a chess game i added one i think helps ballence Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1SDAN Posted November 24, 2010 Report Share Posted November 24, 2010 very good 4 a beginner, and I won't include the picture rating 4, well good pics r hard 2 find, your kinda new, and you firsat should learn OCG. 7/10, a great score 4 a beginner. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shadow of Alpha~ Posted November 24, 2010 Report Share Posted November 24, 2010 these cards sould maybe be posted in Written Cards since there are no pics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightning Bagon Posted November 24, 2010 Report Share Posted November 24, 2010 [quote name='GladiatorBeastAleksander' timestamp='1290629639' post='4807606'] these cards sould maybe be posted in Written Cards since there are no pics [/quote] Yes he should in a [b]written format[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cody Frost Posted November 25, 2010 Report Share Posted November 25, 2010 Along side from the incorrect position of cards as stated above, nice cards. I had made a chess set of monsters to, long ago, but I think I like these better. Very interesting. And my rate: ... .... ..... 7.8/10 or 8/10. Pretty good score just add some pics and then post them here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andybaby1989 Posted November 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2010 Ok im still looking for pics for my spells/traps and my dragon And these were not made by me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andybaby1989 Posted November 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2010 no more Comments? i guess this set got forgotten easily lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daigusto Sphreez Posted November 30, 2010 Report Share Posted November 30, 2010 Well I haven't looked in detail, but to be honest, a chess set isn't exactly the most exciting idea, in my opinion. Something more colourful perhaps? Black and white are equal, which is fair, but a few light/dark variations could add interest (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andybaby1989 Posted November 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2010 [quote name='Thermatic' timestamp='1291078179' post='4819437'] Well I haven't looked in detail, but to be honest, a chess set isn't exactly the most exciting idea, in my opinion. Something more colourful perhaps? Black and white are equal, which is fair, but a few light/dark variations could add interest (: [/quote] i know but this is my first set and yea i thought it be a neat idea I got 2-3 more for sets but no pics for them that be good for it lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phlox Lover Posted November 30, 2010 Report Share Posted November 30, 2010 I like it but isn't Bishop spelt with an O? Also, add comma's to effects When this card is destroyed, bla bla bla Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Starrk Posted November 30, 2010 Report Share Posted November 30, 2010 Unfortunately, the pictures used were terrible. I must also say that the effects of these cards are unoriginal. The OCG used in these cards are also terrible. I must ask you to take a look at the OCG thread. 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andybaby1989 Posted November 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2010 [quote name='Coyote Starrk' timestamp='1291082560' post='4819636'] Unfortunately, the pictures used were terrible. I must also say that the effects of these cards are unoriginal. The OCG used in these cards are also terrible. I must ask you to take a look at the OCG thread. 3/10 [/quote] could u link it pelase Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Glass Posted November 30, 2010 Report Share Posted November 30, 2010 The idea is good, but as Starrk said their OCG and pics are terrible and the effects unoriginal. Actually, you have to work also on your normal grammar, please use some punctuation marks and is Bishop not Biship. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L33tm4573r Posted November 30, 2010 Report Share Posted November 30, 2010 oh theise are friggen awesome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Seth Dawnstrider Posted November 30, 2010 Report Share Posted November 30, 2010 Actually, I like the artwork, it is very imaginative. I have to agree on the effects, though. You could consider remaking the cards' effects to something better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jkuri19 Posted November 30, 2010 Report Share Posted November 30, 2010 These are some interesting pics so honestly I think you should keep on what you do like this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jake#1 Posted December 1, 2010 Report Share Posted December 1, 2010 awesome cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Chess Posted December 1, 2010 Report Share Posted December 1, 2010 Where did u get these pictures!!!!! Thay are awesome!!! My name is war chess so i would be a hipocrit if i didnt make a set like this. PM me with this images links. 9/10 OCG is almost there, keep going!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jemjosher Posted December 3, 2010 Report Share Posted December 3, 2010 i like the art work to be honest it look like some of the special editions that konami puts out from time to time ok i can only thin of twice but i dont watch everything yugioh thats poped out so i may have missed more any how i can see that every one else as riped in to you about ocg it needs work its true and the pics would be brought to new hights if you could traspose them on better background such as lightning or even the bandi card of elegant egotist just some ideas to make it better well have an outrageous time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ranger72 Posted December 3, 2010 Report Share Posted December 3, 2010 [quote name='Andybaby1989' timestamp='1290585255' post='4806834'] ok i found some awsome pics someone made on the net so i didnt draw these [u][b]Monsters[/b][/u] [img]http://i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv126/andybaby1989/WhiteChessPawn.jpg?t=1291015156[/img][img]http://i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv126/andybaby1989/BlackChessPawn.jpg?t=1291015156[/img] [img]http://i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv126/andybaby1989/WhiteChessRook.jpg?t=1291015178[/img][img]http://i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv126/andybaby1989/BlackChessRook.jpg?t=1291015156[/img] [img]http://i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv126/andybaby1989/WhiteChessBiship.jpg?t=1291015156[/img][img]http://i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv126/andybaby1989/BlackChessBiship.jpg?t=1291015156[/img] [img]http://i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv126/andybaby1989/WhiteChessKnight.jpg?t=1291015156[/img][img]http://i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv126/andybaby1989/BlackChessKnight.jpg?t=1291015156[/img] [u][b]Synchros[/b][/u] [img]http://i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv126/andybaby1989/WhiteChessQueen.jpg?t=1291015156[/img][img]http://i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv126/andybaby1989/BlackChessQueen.jpg?t=1291015156[/img] [img]http://i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv126/andybaby1989/WhiteChessKing.jpg?t=1291015156[/img][img]http://i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv126/andybaby1989/BlackChessKing.jpg?t=1291015156[/img] [/quote] dude why arent these cards real they r awesome but just one thing ???gain 1000 life for each discard??? thats not very realistic but everything else is awesome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth Revan of the Sith Posted December 5, 2010 Report Share Posted December 5, 2010 I love it! It is very hard to come by sets with these similar type picture Kudos to you the effects were a little bland but it was amazingly creative. Yoou make chess look epic my friend 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Magician 3 Posted December 5, 2010 Report Share Posted December 5, 2010 D'you make the pictures yourself??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
claude_c_kenny Posted December 5, 2010 Report Share Posted December 5, 2010 including what everyone else said, make the bishops level 4 and the queen level 6, so you can use any of them to summon either king or queen. also, I forget if its king or queen, but one should have an instant win/lose effect, or something similar to victory dragon. other than that, im glad I clicked this topic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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