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D.D Forest Protector
[img]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/9379/224490p.jpg[/img]
This card gains ATK equal to the amount of monstres in your graveyard x500. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. This card can be treated as 2 tributes for a tribute summon of a level 7 or higher monster.

Enraged Titan
[img]http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/3791/224490.jpg[/img]
During battle between this attacking monster and a DEF position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of the attacking monster, inflict the difference as battle damage to your opponents Life Points.

Flondara, the Femanine Warrior
[img]http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/3438/224490f.jpg[/img]
This card can attack your opponent directly. When this card is destroyed, you can special summon 1 level 4 or lower Warrior-type monster from your deck or your hand.

Yorozukiyama
[img]http://img686.imageshack.us/img686/3791/224490.jpg[/img]
When this card is destroyed and sent to the graveyard, you can pay 500 Life Points to destroy 1 monster your opponent controls. While this card is in the graveyard, all Warrior-type monsters gain 500 ATK

Warrior of Light End
[img]http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/3025/224490v.jpg[/img]
Light End Dragon + 1 Tuner
Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can send 1 monster from your hand to the graveyard to have this card gain half that cards ATK Points. If you do, this card cannot attack on your next turn and destroy 1 monster you control.

Serket, Warrior of the Netherworld
[img]http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/3791/224490.jpg[/img]
This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in your Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this card effect:
. You can send 1 face-up Equip Card you control to the graveyard to Special summon 1 Warrior-Type monster from your hand of deck.

Shenron: Neon King of Mythical Beasts
[img]http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/3791/224490.jpg[/img]
This card can attack twice during every battle phase of the duel. This card can also destroy 1 monster your opponent controls. If you use this effect, this card attacks once this battle phase.

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ok first off, D.D.:
Effect is alright, but it's kinda OP'd for something of a low level and can't be destroyed. So all in all, 6/10 for me.

Enraged Titan:
Excellent. Picture, Name, and OCG are excellent. 10/10.

Flondara:
Great pic, Great effect, but maybe come up with a more creative name. Other than that, 8/10.

Yoro....:
Picture is great, Name is great (even though i can't even pronounce it). Effect and OCG are excellent. 9.5/10

Light End:
Not bad, a few OCG errors in my opinion, but other than that, 9/10.
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[center][b]OCG Corrections[/b][/center]



This card gains ATK equal to the amount of monstres in your graveyard x500. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. This card can be treated as 2 tributes for a tribute summon of a level 7 or higher monster.

[b]This card gains ATK equal to the amount of monsters in your Graveyard x500. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. This card can be treated as 3 Tributes for a Tribute Summon of a Level 7 or higher monster.[/b]




During battle between this attacking monster and a DEF position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of the attacking monster, inflict the difference as battle damage to your opponents Life Points.

[b]During a battle between this monster and a defense position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this monster, inflict the difference as battle damage to your opponent's Life Points.[/b]




This card can attack your opponent directly. When this card is destroyed, you can special summon 1 level 4 or lower Warrior-type monster from your deck or your hand.


[b]This monster can attack your opponent directly. When this card is destroyed, you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Warrior-Type monster from your deck or hand.[/b]




When this card is destroyed and sent to the graveyard, you can pay 500 Life Points to destroy 1 monster your opponent controls. While this card is in the graveyard, all Warrior-type monsters gain 500 ATK

[b]When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can pay 500 Life Points to destroy 1 monster your opponent controls. While this card is in the Graveyard, all Warrior-Type monsters gain 500 ATK.[/b]




Light End Dragon + 1 Tuner
Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can send 1 monster from your hand to the graveyard to have this card gain half that cards ATK Points. If you do, this card cannot attack on your next turn and destroy 1 monster you control.



[b]"Light End Dragon" + 1 Tuner
Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can send 1 monster from your hand to the Graveyard to increase this card's ATK by half it's ATK. If you do, this card cannot attack your next turn and you must destroy 1 monster you control.[/b]


[center][b]Picture/Creativity Review[/b][/center]


Let's be real here- these effects [b]are not[/b] creative. I've seen these effects on [b]REAL[/b] Yu-Gi-Oh! cards. This is just cut-and-paste kind of things with a few tweaks and adjustments. Serious work is needed.
For the pictures, they're OK. Nothing to review.


[center][b]Score[/b][/center]


After reviewing these cards, their effects, pictures, etc., I've come to my decision. Work more on these, please.

[center][b]3.75/10[/b][/center]
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[center][b]OCG Corrections[/b][/center]

This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in your Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this card effect:
. You can send 1 face-up Equip Card you control to the graveyard to Special summon 1 Warrior-Type monster from your hand of deck.

[b]This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in your Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this card effect:
. You can send 1 face-up Equip Card you control to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 Warrior-Type monster from your hand or deck.[/b]



This card can attack twice during every battle phase of the duel. This card can also destroy 1 monster your opponent controls. If you use this effect, this card attacks once this battle phase.

[b]This monster can attack twice during each player's Battle Phase. This card can destroy 1 monster your opponent controls. If you do, this monster can only attack once during the turn this effect was activated.[/b]


[center][b]Other[/b][/center]
I don't really see anything wrong except (above OCG correction) when can the monster destroy another monster your opponent controls? Pictures- decent.



[center][b]Score

7.2/10[/b][/center]
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