My newest Card Burn Effect Monster

[forteller]

[size="5"][center][img]http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/2397/291097nr.jpg[/img]
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This monster cant be Special Summoned except By removing from play monster(s) from your Graveyard who's level equals 8. When this card is Special Summoned send any number of cards from the top of your Deck to the Graveyard (MAX5.) Place 1 Eruption Counter on this for each card you sent from the top of your deck to the Graveyard by this cards effect.During your End phase remove 1 Eruption Counter from this monster to inflict 1000 damage to your opponent's Life Points. If During your Standby Phase this card has no Eruption Counters on it send it to the Graveyard.

Or Possiblly this one
[img]http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/8853/291097f.jpg[/img]


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[Catman25]

For such a high ATK monster, the summoning conditions are very lax, making it quite op'ed, especially w/the addition of the burn.

Personally I like the second pic more.

[forteller]

hmmm bump im thinking on that offer suggestions

[Lord Smeagle]

The first pic is clearly a Fiend, the second would more likely be a Dragon or Pyro.

[Tee-Jaie]

I used the first pic for a card before, so, I automatically go with the second pic.

[Haou Kaiser]

I like this card, except the summoning conditions seem to be, well idk. It seems too easy to summon this monster. Maybe the better conditions would be to send 5 cards to the graveyard and add 1 counter for each FIRE monster sent to the graveyard or something like that.

[forteller]

yeah your rite i just thought of something

updated

[forteller]

opps almost forgot New summoning condition idea Credit to Danngirl

[forteller]

no more comments?

[DannyGirl]

the second pic kick the first ones but and nice implementation of my summoning conditions this card is worthy
The card is pretty cool so its maximum potential is to get on the field deal 5000 damage over 5 turns along with any battle damage it may do... that very powerful but with only 2300 Atk its not op at least i dont think so.

[forteller]

thxs for ur input

[forteller]

bump

[forteller]

bump

[♠>:Stick-Man:<♠]

OCG fix:
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This monster [b]cannot[/b] be Special Summoned except [b]by[/b] removing from play monster(s) from your Graveyard who's [b]Level(s) [/b] equal 8. When this card is Special Summoned [b]successfully,[/b] send any number of cards from the top of your Deck to the Graveyard ([b]max[/b] 5). Place 1 Eruption Counter on this [b]card[/b] for each card you sent from the top of your [b]Deck[/b] to the Graveyard by this [b]card's [/b]effect. During your End [b]Phase,[/b] remove 1 Eruption Counter from this [b]card[/b] to inflict 1000 damage to your opponent's Life Points. During your Standby Phase, if this card has no Eruption Counters on it, send it to the Graveyard.

There you go, the bolded parts is what you did wrong.

Anyways, great card. I think the tribute is easy to do and this card's a bit overpowered, cause total, you could inflict 5000 damage to your opponent, thats more than half of the life points you start with!

You should lower the infliction damage to 600, 700, or possibly 800 at least.

Besides that, 8'

Good job.

[forteller]

thxs for the fix
update Tomorrow its getting late

[Ярополк Пономарёв]

[i]lets see...
Creativity
Pic 2, please. Creativity and Pictures are great. 9/10
Balance
[Quote]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This monster cant be Special Summoned except By removing from play monster(s) from your Graveyard who's level equals 8. [/quote]
Hmm...yeah its good. 9/10
[Quote]When this card is Special Summoned send any number of cards from the top of your Deck to the Graveyard (MAX5.) Place 1 Eruption Counter on this for each card you sent from the top of your deck to the Graveyard by this cards effect.During your End phase remove 1 Eruption Counter from this monster to inflict 1000 damage to your opponent's Life Points.[/quote]
Yikes! 5/10
[Quote]If During your Standby Phase this card has no Eruption Counters on it send it to the Graveyard.[/quote]
Making it a little better. 6/10[/i]

[i]Total: 6/10[/i]

[forteller]

Waht is i made the burn effect weaker say 700???