X●L'z ~Composite Beast~

[BulletMan]

[center][u][b][color="#0000FF"][size="7"]Composite Beast[/size][/color][/b][/u]


[img]http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/4092/32232j.jpg[/img]

[b]Lore;
[i][u]You can Special Summon this card from your hand by Releasing 1 monster you control with a lower ATK than this card, but with a higher Level. Once per turn, you can lower this cards ATK by 500 to increase its Level by 1. Also once per turn, you can discard 1 Monster Card from your hand. Destroy all monsters this card battles at the start of the Damage Step (without damage calculation.) that has the same Attribute as the discarded monster until your opponent's End Phase.[/b][/u][/i]


I'm considering making this card into a set, but I need more colorful pics before I feel like I can do that. But I might.

What'cha think? And ideas for the set (Obviously, will have many different elements in it due to "Composite" in its name.)


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[Kazooie]

[i]You can Special Summon this card from your hand by Releasing 1 monster you control with a lower ATK than this card, but with a higher Level. Once per turn, you can lower this card[b]'[/b]s ATK by 500 to increase its Level by 1. Also once per turn, you can discard 1 Monster Card from your hand [b]to[/b] destroy all monsters this card battles at the start of the Damage Step (without damage calculation.) that has the same Attribute as the discarded monster until your opponent's End Phase.[/i]

Bolded is a change. I believe you need to have "to" instead of a full stop in the second effect, otherwise it would seem to be two different effects.


The card itself is balanced, although I don't see people special summoning it often with the requirements you gave it, unless of course a lot of cards in your set you have planned can fulfill that requirement. I can see why you have the second effect, as I assume the other Composite Beasts would have similar special summoning effects, although I do think that a 500 point loss is a bit too much. Maybe two or three hundred instead. The last effect is nicely done, and I'm sure that the set has plenty of different attributes of monsters that can work with this card. I can't really say if he is UP'ed or not without the set, but with just him, I would say UP'ed. Maybe reduce the ATK loss to increase the level, or post the set so I can get a better idea. I'll keep an eye out for more.

[BulletMan]

Well, I could make a Set. Probably take me a day. But I could get 3 other guys and a few spells/traps to go with it.

I was thinking, while making it a set where it would be some monsters have a lower level than others, but this weird Level up/down abilities. Like a Level 2, increase it's Level, now it's Level 3, now you can play a new Composite monster. Something around the lines of editing their Levels a lot, to help get other guys out, while also focusing on elements and tuning.

Yeah, I'll make this into a set.

[♠>:Stick-Man:<♠]

Dude I love this card, and by "Releasing" what do you mean?

From there on the effect is pretty outstanding and powerful.

[BulletMan]

In the OCG (Not the grammar, but japan), Releasing = Tributing. I just thought Releasing would be cooler here.

[♠>:Stick-Man:<♠]

Oh okay I didn't know that, thanks for telling me.

[Ieyasu Tokugawa]

Only other grammer change is that it should be "have" instead of "has" in the last sentence. If you want the first effect to be useful, you'd have to make a set of monsters that fit the requirement, the only current monster that I can think of is Woodborg Inpachi, but i can't remember if it's lvl 5 or 6.

Also, this made me think about Composite Santa

[ura_kai]

kool kard!!!